@Didier Landner Hi, thank you for your review. I attempted to revise my article according to your notes. Let me know what you think. Apextrancelike (talk) 22:21, 2 February 2026 (UTC)
- @Apextrancelike: You're still using discogs and rate your music (User-generated sources) for a discography entry. If AllMusic does not show them then find another reliable independent source e.g. Apple Music.
- Check references for errors in formatting/external links, add/fix dates, add/adjust author(s) where applicable.
- His suicide should be mentioned in Lead.Didier Landner (talk) 03:27, 3 February 2026 (UTC)
@Didier Landner I added sources for his discography. Why should his suicide be mentioned in the lead? How should I phrase it? Apextrancelike (talk) 19:20, 9 February 2026 (UTC)
- Discography: adjust refs. e.g. ref [9]: {{Citation |title=Rock 'N' Roll Fragments by Charlie Megira & The Hefker Girl on Apple Music |date=2003-01-01 |url=https://music.apple.com/us/album/rock-n-roll-fragments/1480206686 |access-date=2026-02-09 |language=en-US}} > {{Citation |title=Rock 'N' Roll Fragments |author=Charlie Megira & the Hefker Girl |website=[[Apple Music]] |date=January 1, 2003 |url=https://music.apple.com/us/album/rock-n-roll-fragments/1480206686 |access-date=February 9, 2026 }} Note: title is name of album, author is performing artist (use the not The), check all dates are in correct format, English is default language, hence not required in ref.
- His death is a significant point of his biography, it is covered in numerous reliable, independent secondary sources and is described in this draft in its own sub-section. Try something like "He died by suicide in 2016 in Berlin, aged 44."
- Didier Landner (talk) 10:40, 10 February 2026 (UTC)20:41, 10 February 2026 (UTC)~
