Talk:Pay to fly

Ninetyone, your time on Pay to fly is appreciated. Your revision stated :

This article has multiple issues. Please help improve it or discuss these issues on the talk page. (Learn how and when to remove these messages) This article is written like a personal reflection, personal essay, or argumentative essay that states a Wikipedia editor's personal feelings or presents an original argument about a topic. (May 2016) This article may contain original research. (May 2016) This article relies excessively on references to primary sources. (May 2016)

In good faith, instead of undoing it, these are my respective remarks :

• Removal of my opinion (CockpitSeeker) on Pay to fly is what got the article approved in the first place by Aerospeed after one rejection. As a result, article currently displays structured referenced material only : quoted pros and cons from a diversified range of stakeholders, statistics, news reports etc... which are exempt from my feelings/opinion by nature. Besides, "on the issue of « pay-to-fly » [...] the European Commission met ECA and Cockpitseeker on 18 June to collect their views and evidence"^[1], which ranks de facto the opinion of the cockpitseeker.com as expert in my books, among other sources.
• The Pay to fly topic is not exotic, on TV alone, France covered it 4 times^[2][3][4][5], Belgium twice^[6][7], the Netherlands once^[8], Portugal once^[9]. What might appear original research is in fact largely disclosed and exploited in the mainstream media, including the press, and I am willing to elaborate.
• Of current 125 references, it is my belief secondary sources are largely present (need I mention them all ?), even tertiary sources (e.g. French Senate report^[10], I forgot to add the Ghent University study^[11] by the way).

These reasons are why I tend to not comprehend the aforementioned revision and request clarification. Thank you in advance !

The referent of the word "it" is not clear at the end of the 1st paragraph. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.81.165.22 (talk) 18:31, 18 August 2018 (UTC)