Talk:Tamagotchi Connection: Corner Shop 3

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Nominator: IngeniousPachyderm (talk · contribs) 20:50, 1 June 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: Alexeyevitch (talk · contribs) 01:17, 9 June 2026 (UTC)

I'll review this article. Alexeyevitch^(talk) 01:17, 9 June 2026 (UTC)

@Alexeyevitch Thank you for your review, please see my comments responses to your suggestions below.

1a.

• The game released in Japan on September 27, 2007 → The game was released in Japan on September 27, 2007
  • Done
• The game received mixed reception → The game received mixed reviews
  • Done
• mingame - clearly a typo
  • Fixed
• DS' microphone → DS's microphone
  • Done
• brush the dust off by blowing into the DS' microphone to blow dust off - seems repetitive
  • Agreed, cleaned up now.
• shops will be four-stories high → shops are four-stories high
  • Done, also wikilinked to Storey.
• After successfully serving a number of customers and receiving a sufficiently high rating - wordy
  • Removed "a number of".
• Also, what is is the difference between 'multiplayer" and "true multiplayer"?
  • Changed from "true" to "real-time multiplayer", as that is what the reference is referring to. Also added wikilink for Multiplayer.
• get back on their feet - informal wording.
  • Reworded.
• towns → town's
  • Done
• at an MSRP of $29.99 what's that?
  • Retail price in USA. I'll actually remove that and the other prices listed though because of (WP:NOTPRICE).
• the games presentation → the game's presentation
• a total off 249,830 - typo
  • Fixed
• Also, I would recommend correcting the dates in the references to MDY instead of YDM (e.g. 2019-02-21 to February 21, 2019)
  • Added the template and cleaned up references. Also added translated titles to non-English sources, and cleaned up some other sources.

1b.

• costumes purchased for your partner Tamagotchi, MOS:YOU says Avoid addressing the reader using you or your
  • Fixed
• MOS:NUMERAL says Integers from zero to nine are spelled out in words.
  • Fixed.
• The game doesn't feature true multiplayer → The game does not feature true multiplayer (MOS:CONTRACTION)
  • Fixed
• § Plot is in accordance with MOS:VGPLOT

2b.

• the references are mostly reliable. I see that the "Cite Unseen" tool is flagging VideoGamer for being unreliable, but they are not used for any strong claims, so in this case I think they are fine.
  • I was also curious about the VideoGamer source. It's listed as a Situational source according to the Video Games Wikiproject, but says it is considered generally reliable from 2004 to 2017. The article cited is from 2008, so I believe it is reliable.

2c.

• [3] source link appears to be dead
  • This URL has now been fixed

4.

• sold poorly is quite strong wording, I would instead say had lower sales
  • Done

6b.

• Captions are mostly sufficient, although I think the later part of the caption Mametchi wearing the Postal Worker costume [...] is excessive
  • Shortened this caption now.

Thank you very much for your review, and please let me know if you have any other suggestions. IngeniousPachyderm (talk) 17:31, 9 June 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for your responsiveness. Passing now. Alexeyevitch^(talk) 23:25, 9 June 2026 (UTC)

More information Rate, Attribute ...

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	The game released in Japan on September 27, 2007 → The game was released in Japan on September 27, 2007 The game received mixed reception → The game received mixed reviews mingame - clearly a typo DS' microphone → DS's microphone brush the dust off by blowing into the DS' microphone to blow dust off - seems repetitive shops will be four-stories high → shops are four-stories high After successfully serving a number of customers and receiving a sufficiently high rating - wordy Also, what is is the difference between 'multiplayer" and "true multiplayer"? get back on their feet - informal wording. towns → town's at an MSRP of $29.99 what's that? the games presentation → the game's presentation a total off 249,830 - typo Also, I would recommend correcting the dates in the references to MDY instead of YDM (e.g. 2019-02-21 to February 21, 2019)
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	costumes purchased for your partner Tamagotchi, MOS:YOU says Avoid addressing the reader using you or your MOS:NUMERAL says Integers from zero to nine are spelled out in words. The game doesn't feature true multiplayer → The game does not feature true multiplayer (MOS:CONTRACTION) § Plot is in accordance with MOS:VGPLOT
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	Yes
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	the references are mostly reliable. I see that the "Cite Unseen" tool is flagging VideoGamer for being unreliable, but they are not used for any strong claims, so in this case I think they are fine.
	2c. it contains no original research.	[2] check, [3] source link appears to be dead, [6] check, [23] check, [31] check, [34] check, [46] check, [50] check
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.	Earwig highlights quotes. Nothing of concern.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	Coverage is good
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	Yes
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	sold poorly is quite strong wording, I would instead say had lower sales
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	article is stable with no ongoing edit wars
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	File:Tamagotchi Connection Corner Shop 3.jpg Fair Use Y File:Tamagotchi Connection Corner Shop 3 gameplay screenshot.webp Fair Use Y File:Tamagotchi Connection Corner Shop 3 - Mametchi Postal Worker Outfit.webp Fair Use Y File:Bandai data carddass initial type 20121013.jpg CC BY SA 4 Y
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	Captions are mostly sufficient, although I think the later part of the caption Mametchi wearing the Postal Worker costume [...] is excessive
	7. Overall assessment.

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