@Valjean, @M.boli, @Ixocactus, and others:
In the "Synopsis" subsection, multiple editors have insisted upon keeping the following phrase:
"Studies show the drug is ineffective against COVID-19"
There are a lot of problems with this. I thought they were self-evident and had simply been overlooked, but apparently, the phrase is seen as not only correct, but an essential part of the "synopsis".
Problem 1: "Factcheck.org" is not an appropriate source for making scientific statements of fact in Wikivoice. Duh.
Problem 2: "Factcheck.org"'s source for the claim is...factcheck.org! Nice! Specifically, this article, which was published all the way back in July of 2021. The article is a story about a scientific debate that was taking place at the time, between some scientists who were skeptical of hydroxychloroquine's efficacy and at least one scientist who stated "that the question on whether the drugs can provide a benefit for early treatment or prevention “remains open.”" In the article, the scientists' hypotheses, tentative conclusions, and critiques of each other's studies are presented in narrative form. It does not demonstrate that hydroxychloroquine is "ineffective", it merely presents that as a view that are held by some (but not all) scientists in the context of an ongoing debate.
Problem 3: A lot of research has taken place regarding hydroxychloroquine and COVID-19 since July 2021. A sample:
Problem 4: As these studies demonstrate, there remains a lively, ongoing debate regarding hydroxychloroquine and COVID-19, surrounding dosage, severity of infection, and the relative merits of observational studies versus RCTs.
There are a lot of other studies like these from 2022-2024.
Problem 5: The phrase, besides being misleading and poorly sourced, is completely irrelevant to a "synopsis" of the book, which is the name of the section. There is already a "critical reception" section, where we provide third-party commentary about the book. The synopsis is for accurately summarizing the book in question, not for sloppily and inaccurately summarizing the current state of hydroxychloroquine research in order to further a narrative.
Problem 6: The only reason to include the phrase is to frame Kennedy's book in the context of a political narrative regarding Anthony Fauci, RFK, and others. It is a textbook example of POV pushing and the politicization of science.
Good encyclopedic writing and common sense demand that the phrase be removed entirely. A compromise might be to accurately describe the state of hydroxychloroquine-COVID research, but I still think it would be undue here, and the energy needed to do so would be better spent updating the out-of-date article about the subject.
I understand that the goal of many is to portray RFK as negatively as possible, so that the reader understands that they are supposed to dislike him. But please, let's not politicize science in order to push that POV. It's tacky, unencyclopedic, and misleading.
The fact that bringing this into question has led to me being accused of being a "vandal" and a "weasel" further suggests that emotions are at play, rather than neutral analysis.
You are all smart folks. Let's do better. Philomathes2357 (talk) 06:14, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Since this article is about the book TRAF, it needs sources that talk about TRAF. Scientific studies typically do not mention such crappy books by uninformed laypeople. Factchecks do, that is why we use those as a source for this article. But we also have a wikilink to the relevant article, which contains better sources about exactly this subject and eliminates the problem that factchecks are weak sources.
- Thank you for equating your opinion with truth in phrases like
Good encyclopedic writing and common sense demands
and You are all smart folks. Let's do better
as if the conclusion from those were to agree with you. That way, everybody can see that you think you know better than everybody else.
- Thank you also for accusing everybody who disagrees with you of a specific agenda. That way, everybody can see that your way of thinking runs along the lines of hidden agendas and not along the lines of cooperatively writing good articles.
- Thank you also for interpreting the WP:WEASEL link as calling you a weasel. That way, everybody can see that they have to explain even the simplest things to you. --Hob Gadling (talk) 06:32, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- The sentence in question is not about the book TRAF. The sentence characterizes the efficacy of hydroxychloroquine in treating COVID-19. Therefore, the sentence is technically subject to the guidelines of MEDRS, which says "This guideline supports the general sourcing policy with specific attention to what is appropriate for medical content in any Wikipedia article".
- I guess that's problem #7. That pretty much means we have no choice but to either remove the sentence or to invoke IAR to keep it as-is.
- I did not accuse "everybody" who disagrees with me of anything. Thanks for the personal attack.
- Thanks also for the condescending "everybody can see that they have to explain even the simplest things to you." I find that especially compelling. As I said: let's do better. Philomathes2357 (talk) 06:47, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- The article is about the book, so all sources have to be about the book. See WP:SYNTH. Linking to an article that is based on WP:MEDRS sources is enough; sources that are about a crappy book and fulfil MEDRS do not exist, therefore the demand for such sources is unreasonable.
I did not accuse
Really? I understand that the goal of many is to portray RFK as negatively as possible
is a pretty clear case of poisoning the well. It implicitly accuses everybody who contradicts you of having a hidden agenda.
Thanks also for the condescending
Don't make such stupid mistakes (or intentional misrepresentations? Who knows) as confusing a wikilink with calling you a weasel, and people will not treat you like someone who makes stupid mistakes. --Hob Gadling (talk) 07:06, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- If all sources have to be about the book, all claims made in the article should have to be about the book. The claim I am taking issue with has nothing to do with the book, which is why it should be removed. If it is not removed, it needs to at least be cited sufficiently, and treated as a claim subject to MEDRS, not a claim about the book.
- That's not an accusation. That's just an acknowledgement of an obvious fact that everyone sees. I'm not even necessarily saying that it's a bad thing - maybe there is a cognizable argument for doing so, in order to make sure the reader doesn't fall prey to "misinformation". That argument has not been made, though, and even if it were, I still think the sentence in question is improperly sourced, undue, and misleading.
- As I said, I'm open to a reasonable compromise. "When they assessed clinical trial data in 2023, Catalina Jaramillo and Kate Yandell at factcheck.org wrote that several large randomized clinical trials had found no benefits of hydroxychloroquine for COVID-19 patients."
- That sentence would probably still be undue, but it would be an improvement. Philomathes2357 (talk) 03:25, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
This whole push about whitewashing hydroxychloroquine here is a violation of WP:COATRACK. This article is about the book. Take it to the hydroxychloroquine article and settle it there. Then, and only then, could one maybe be justified in making extremely short mention here, in the context of how the book mentions it, not to promote it. If that were to happen, it should be in its historical context, showing that Kennedy promoted a drug, that at the time he was promoting it, was not accepted by the medical profession as effective for treating COVID-19, and that statistics had shown its use increased the number of deaths. That would be consistent with how we treat fringe subjects, and much about Kennedy is fringe. Then, if the scientific consensus changed, and several RS mentioned the book and Kennedy's claims as being prescient at the time, one could also mention (not instead of) that newer fact here using those RS.
We are FAR FROM ANYWHERE CLOSE TO ANY OF THAT NOW. Philomathes2357, you need to drop this if you wish to avoid returning to ANI and getting a topic ban or worse. (I don't recall right now, but aren't you editing under some type of topic ban or warnings already and need to be careful?) -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 13:27, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- You could only call this "whitewashing" if you ignored my initial comment about the 6 problems with the sentence, which I suspect is the case.
- If we want to avoid WP:COATRACK, rather than misrepresenting the state of scientific research with an out-of-date, non-medical source, perhaps we just remove that sentence? It's the only sentence in the "synopsis" section that isn't about the book. It's a dishonest, intentionally misleading sentence. We could probably repurpose the source and use it in the "critical reception" section, but only to discuss the book, not to summarize the state of hydroxychloroquine research.
- I'm frustrated, because what I'm saying should not be remotely controversial, much less trigger threats, personal attacks, and ALL CAPS RAGE. I feel like I'm living in upside-down world whenever I get on Wikipedia. Something's gone seriously wrong with the project. Maybe an RFC is in order here. Philomathes2357 (talk) 16:16, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- As others have said, this is not about COVID it is about the book. Please read wp:synthesis. Slatersteven (talk) 16:21, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- The sentence has nothing to do with the book. The sentence makes a factual claim about the current state of scientific research about hydroxychloroquine and COVID-19. So, it must be held to the standard of MEDRS, as another editor mentioned above. The source currently cited is a non-medical source, and it's out of date. I've provided multiple medical sources from the past 12 months that contradict the claim that's made in the sentence. Hydroxychloroquine's efficacy should not be adjudicated here. The claim is misleading and should be removed. I agree with you, Slatersteven this article is about the book. So let's remove the sentence in question. Philomathes2357 (talk) 16:24, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- So lets use this source https://www.who.int/news/item/04-07-2020-who-discontinues-hydroxychloroquine-and-lopinavir-ritonavir-treatment-arms-for-covid-19 Slatersteven (talk) 16:29, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Why would we use a non-medical news article from July 2020, when research was in its infancy? Research on the topic is ongoing. Why not use one of the three sources I linked to above, all of which are from actual scientific publications, not news articles, and all of which are from the past 12 months? Better yet, why not just remove the sentence? Philomathes2357 (talk) 16:32, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- You do know who, WHO is? Slatersteven (talk) 16:36, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Of course I do. The article you linked to is out-of-date, as I mentioned, and it is a press release, not an academic study. Philomathes2357 (talk) 16:37, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- So WHO does ow recommends it use, link please?
- Also https://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/coronavirus/in-depth/hydroxychloroquine-treatment-covid-19/art-20555331 Slatersteven (talk) 16:40, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Please look at my initial comment in this thread, under the subheading "Problem 3". There are several academic studies from the past 12 months that conclude that, within certain parameters, the drug is effective.
- My point is not that hydroxychloroquine is effective. This article isn't the place to adjudicate that. My point is that research is ongoing, and academic literature from 2023 and 2024 demonstrates that the topic is not settled, so we should not be spreading medical misinformation in Wikivoice by stating, or implying, that it is settled. I can't think of a single good reason to do so. Philomathes2357 (talk) 16:45, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- OK so should we change it to "But there is not evidence proofing its efficacy"? Slatersteven (talk) 16:48, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Why? In the previous paragraph, the COVID vaccine is mentioned, but we don't go out of our way to jam in a sentence about the COVID vaccine being "safe and effective".
- Why not just provide a "synopsis" of the book? There's already a section for reactions to the book. We can talk about hydroxychloroquine there, if you want.
- Even if we re-worded the sentence, I think a better phrasing would be "research on the topic is ongoing and has shown mixed results". Your proposed wording is incorrect, as evidence of potential efficacy has been found in multiple studies - I only posted 3 of them, to make my point - there are others.
- Why are we trying to weaponize and twist scientific research to try to frame RFK in a negative light? The rest of the article already goes out of its way to denigrate him to the point of absurdity - and I say that as someone who doesn't even like the guy. This is really strange. Let's just remove the darn sentence and move on with our lives. Philomathes2357 (talk) 16:54, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Because it makes a claim, we can't just up in the claim read wp:blp. Slatersteven (talk) 16:56, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- "we can't just up in the claim"? Can you elaborate on that? Philomathes2357 (talk) 16:58, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- I was trying, you jumped in while I was editing it. We repeat a claim, we have to also put in any claims it is false or inaccurate, read wp:blp. Slatersteven (talk) 17:00, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- I'm familiar with BLP. I'm not familiar with an injunction within BLP to use non-medical sources to spread medical misinformation, which is what we're dealing with here in my view. Could you kindly quote the exact section of BLP that you think justifies/necessitates this sentence's inclusion? Philomathes2357 (talk) 17:02, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
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"Criticism and praise should be included if they can be sourced to reliable secondary sources, so long as the material is presented responsibly, conservatively, and in a disinterested tone." we cannot say a person deliberately tried to kill people without including any information that contradicted such a claim. "In the case of public figures, there will be a multitude of reliable published sources, and BLPs should simply document what these sources say. If an allegation or incident is noteworthy, relevant, and well documented, it belongs in the article" (so arguably the recsi8ign line "The book accuses Fauci of deliberately neglecting to use hydroxychloroquine in order to increase the number of people who would die from COVID-19" should not even by the the article). For a start. Slatersteven (talk) 17:10, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
THis is going nowhere and needs closing. Slatersteven (talk) 17:10, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
Philo, "spread medical misinformation" is what Kennedy does. That you consider RS to be doing that based on your opinion of the current state of research is just that, your opinion, and you're getting pushback on that. It would be wise for you to not "die on that hill" without the backing of fellow editors.
There is no rush. Wait for the medical consensus to change. Then we'll gladly help you. -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 20:05, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- There isn't a medical consensus. That's the whole issue. Take a look at the studies I linked and explain how portraying the issue as "settled science" is anything but misleading. It's not "my interpretation". The notion that "studies have shown hydroxychloroquine is ineffective" is YOUR interpretation (plural you) - one that happens to be highly dubious, and based on one non-medical source from non-experts from 2021.
- The Wikipedia page on the topic of hydroxychloroquine is woefully out of date. That should be fixed, too, and I'd gladly help in doing so if one of you actually cares enough about hydroxychloroquine to join me. But the fact that that article is bad does not justify leaving poorly-sourced, incorrect medical information on this article. I think that if I allowed the misleading medical information to stay up, without significant pushback, I would actually be violating the rules.
- I don't say this as an insult, but rather an acknowledgement of a self-evident truth: I understand that the goal of this article is to paint RFK in as kooky a light as possible, and ensure that the reader does not make the mistake of taking him seriously. You can say "that's not true!", but come on. You aren't fooling anyone. And I'm not even saying that it's necessarily a bad goal! He is a little kooky! I'm just saying that this particular sentence cannot be justified on any level. Nobody has even really tried to justify it - they just respond to me with emotion and half-baked arguments that don't even address the points I made.
- I've been trying to be reasonable. I've proposed several alternatives. I've tried to meet in the middle and reach a consensus. Here's another one. What if we say this:
- "According to Kate Yandell and Catalina Jaramillo at Factcheck.org, studies as of July 2021 had not demonstrated hydroxychloroquine's effectiveness against COVID-19". Then, we can keep the source, and keep the "rebuttal" of the synopsis, without going overboard and putting medical misinformation in Wikivoice or misleading the reader. How about that? Philomathes2357 (talk) 22:38, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Oh, final thought until someone else responds, @Valjean - I do not consider RS to be spreading medical misinformation, as you say. I think (know) that Wikipedia is spreading medical misinformation (arguably disinformation at this point) in order to promote a certain narrative, by cherry-picking a dubious source while ignoring a plethora of much more reliable academic sources that contradict it. There's nothing wrong with the RS, there's something wrong with the way Wikipedians are choosing to use/not use the sources that are available.
- That is my contention, just to be clear. I'd like for that contention to be acknowledged, taken seriously, and either thoroughly rebutted or incorporated into the consensus, rather than hand-wringing and ban-threatening. That is all for now. Philomathes2357 (talk) 23:12, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
A reason the discussion is going nowhere is Philo dismisses with alacrity pretty good explanations as "very strong personal feelings" and "goal of many is to portray RFK as negatively as possible". I further note that before responding I briefly tried to ascertain the current reliable stance toward HCQ as Covid treatment or prophylaxis. As people have discovered, the public health authorities (CDC, WHO) strongly advise against it. The popular research topics seem to have shifted from does it work a few years ago to nowadays how bad is it and how much damage did it cause during the pandamic. The changes that Philo is pushing are decidedly fringe.
I agree with Slatersteven it is time to close the discussion. Furthermore people might put the hydroxychloroquine articles on their watchlists. The articles possibly could use updating, but not with fringe notions. -- M.boli (talk) 01:44, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- I disagree with your characterization the explanations as "pretty good".
- In fact, the explanations fell so far short of being "pretty good", that it led me to make the mistake of questioning your "real" motives, which I shouldn't have done. I'm sorry for doing that. I was deeply annoyed that you suggested that I was a vandal, and I reacted personally. I take you at your word and I don't have any reason to believe you have any hidden agenda.
- However, you, nor anybody else, has addressed the 7 problems I identified. It's almost impressive that there could be 7 distinct problems within a single declarative sentence, but here we are.
- "I briefly tried to ascertain the current reliable stance toward HCQ as Covid treatment or prophylaxis"
- Did you read the 3 sample articles I provided, and/or the articles it cites? They are not intended to be representative of all literature on the subject - they are intended to demonstrate that modern, 2023-2024 academic peer-reviewed literature has on multiple (more than 3) occasions found that, within certain parameters, hydroxychloroquine has been found to be effective against COVID-19, especially in scholarly observational research. Your characterization of recently-published academic, peer-reviewed literature is not accurate.
- The point is, this article should not be the place to adjudicate that topic - that is why the article should refrain from making poorly-sourced Wikivoice statements about medicine, and should stick to providing what it claims to provide: a "synopsis" and a "critical reception" of the book.
- The article's lead already tells the reader that the book is "misinformation" and "a conspiracy theory extravaganza". We don't need to mislead the reader about the science with semantic games in order to hammer the point home even further. That damages our credibility. I'm sure the readers will come away from the article with the correct opinions about RFK, even if the sentence I object to is removed. Philomathes2357 (talk) 02:22, 2 May 2024 (UTC)