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Peer review for Alive or Just Breathing
I think the first paragraph needs to be tightened up some, but otherwise it's good. When I first read the line "which prompted them to write and record the album to the best of their abilities" I read it as an inference the writer made based on it being their first album on Roadrunner. The line did not make sense until I read the writing and recording section. Maybe something like: "Produced by drummer and guitarist Adam Dutkiewicz, this was the band's first album on a major label, and they devoted significantly more time to the writing and recording process." Then put the current reference [6] afterwards to increase credibility. Or just put the reference on the current line.
The line "a positive message through the music" in the first paragraph also. Perhaps a reference also from the writing and recording part to support this, for people that do not want to read the whole article.
In the Artwork and packaging section, the line "As Killswitch Engage was signing to Roadrunner Records, the band had made sure that written into the contract was for D'Antonio to produce all of Killswitch Engage's artwork." To me, it sounds better without the "had" but that's really being nitpicky. Jesterhead57 (talk) 22:42, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
GA reviews
Wondered if you were available to review one of the two articles on albums I put on the GAN... anyway, cheers. igordebraga ≠ 16:51, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Even though my previous reviewer experience is sparse, sure! igordebraga ≠ 05:04, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
Thanks - think all my experience being reviewed helped me be thorough looking into people's stuff (though I only reviewed before to quick fail or take over an abandoned one as a favor). Also, see if Backspacer needs any more help (think my co-reviewer fixed the issue you raised). igordebraga ≠ 01:46, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
You're welcome. Also, did what you asked in In Your Honor, and hoping it doesn't warrant a GAR...
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igordebraga ≠ 05:06, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
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