User talk:Robert Jan van de Hoek
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Ballona Wetlands
Thank you for your edits to Ballona Wetlands. I tried to fix several of your edits, but ended up reverting all of them, as it would have been difficult to pick through the entire edit. My concern is that while some of your edits were sourced, many others were unsourced and appeared to be original research and promotional (eg. the section about bulldozing). Also, some of your wording was unencyclopedic (eg. "sadly"), and some edits removed sourced content. Please take a moment to read the links in the welcome message above. Also, Help:Referencing for beginners and MOS:WTW may help. Please feel free to ask questions. Cheers. Magnolia677 (talk) 11:34, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
Hello Magnolia677. I thank you and appreciate your edits and sharing your expertise and experience with me.
I will check welcome message links you suggested. Thanks a whole lot.
And thank you for fixing some edits. I did spend a lot of time making edits that are accurate.
FYI, I noticed that many sentences in this Wikipedia Ballona Wetland page were incomplete and/or inaccurate and not sourced, so I considered it okay to be correcting them, and also not sourcing them, as they were obvious axiomatic statements.
Except for my one big mistaken word use of “sadly” I think the words and sentences that I edited do attempt to convey knowledge in a neutral, objective, and accurate manner, yet typos and some minor grammatical and structural sentence errors do come into play, which is why editing and wordsmithing and proofreading are so very important, and that is why I like Wikipedia and the philosophy and ethics that I am learning as a new editor.
Cheers back to you as well. Again, thank you and grateful.
Peace, Robert
PS: I am just learning to edit Wikipedia with an interest to be accurate and follow the rules.
Regarding the use of “sadly” I wondered if that term would be okay, and now wished that I did not use that word. Do you think the rest of the sentence is okay as it is factual that Southern California Gas Company owns a portion of the Ballona Wetlands habitat. Assessor maps and news articles make reference to their having their Gas facility on the Ballona Wetlands. Also, USGS topographic maps show the Gas Company infrastructure on the Ballona Wetlands.
The term, bulldozing, is used in news articles, and the cited EIR states that bulldozers will be used to excavate the Ballona Wetlands, so that is factual. Robert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 13:25, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- Hi, your entire edit is still there in the page history. If you like I can transfer it to your sandbox to work on. Many of your edits were just fine. Magnolia677 (talk) 15:26, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
Hello Magnolia677. Can you please assist with returning the link for Sierrra Club to my edit which you removed.
The location is in the second paragraph at the second sentence beginning with the word, Among, and I had created a link for “Sierra Club” which has a web site for the Ballona Wetlands Restoration Committee.
Thank you. Peace. Cheers, Robert Jan van de Hoek Robert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 15:34, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- Hi, I personally wouldn't add that link, per WP:ELMINOFFICIAL and WP:LINKFARM, but you are welcome to. Magnolia677 (talk) 16:27, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
Hello Again Magnolia677. Thank you for your opinion and thoughts, and for welcoming me to make the edits, and for assisting me in my confidence and empowerment as a new and continuing editor at Wikipedia. Are my comments to you being added here, the right place and format to do so? Am I using the term, 'Wiki' correctly in the following phrase, if I say: "I am happy and glad to be a wiki." Thanks again for being in communication and conversation, with guidance and support. Much appreciated. Grateful as well. Peace, Robert Jan van de Hoek.
Good Morning Magnolia677: You have been so helpful and courteous with assisting me as a new editor, that I ask you again for some editing advice and assistance. At the Ballona Wetlands Wikipedia site, I made several small edits a short time ago.
1. I removed the word "the" preceding "Ballona Wetlands Land Trust" in the second paragraph, near the end of the sentence, of the Ballona Wetlands wikipedia page.
2. In the first paragraph added a single letter, "l" to "de" in order to correct the spelling to "del" as in Marina del Rey, in the first paragraph of the Ballona Wetlands wikipedia page.
3. I added "Sierra Club" as an external link, placing this group (organization) at the head of the external links for the Ballona Wetlands wikipedia page. Does this look to you that I have correctly added the "Sierra Club" including the asterisk?
4. At the very end of the second paragraph of the Ballona Wetlands Wikipedia page, I added pathway link to "Sierra Club" but there is a little blue box still present, which does not seem correct. Would you confirm and possibly make an edit if that box should not be there? Thanks. Peace, Robert Robert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 13:22, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
Good Morning Yet Again Magnolia677. Would you know why there are a set of double brackets surrounding the group name "Friends of Ballona Wetlands" in the second paragraph of the Ballona Wetlands Wikipedia page? Peace, RobertRobert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 13:31, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
- Hi there. Double brackets link to a Wikipedia article, and single brackets link to an external website. Eg. General Motors and General Motors (add a space after the external link and before the text). If you need to call another editor to your page you need to "ping" them or they won't know. Eg. {{ping|Magnolia677}}. Cheers. Magnolia677 (talk) 16:16, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
Hello Magnolia677. Would this message be the right place and time to do a 'ping' with you you, and if so, how do I use the 'Eg.' example you shared and suggested I use? I do not understand the new brackets surround nowise, nor the brackets of the ping magnolia 677? Regarding my specific edit question, I would please like your advice regarding the edit I made on Ballona Wetlands wikpedia page/site. Your edit of double brackets of Sierra Club, now shows me that the public is led to the general web site of the Sierra Club, where the public will find no discussion of Ballona Wetlands, but only find information on the mission, and how to get involved, join, and so forth. Unless there is a link to the specific Sierra Club policy and campaign efforts for the Ballona Wetlands, there is no way for the public to know the position of the Sierra Club on the Ballona Wetlands. The public would like easy and transparent access to knowledge of conservation issues regarding the Ballona Wetlands, which can only be provided with the link that I have added. My uncertainty is if it is okay for the small box to appear at the end of the Sierra Club link? Do you know if that is okay in the main introductory portion of the Ballona Wetlands wikipedia web site? In the External Links, I do see that the small box to the rights of various groups including Sierra Club is okay to appear, so it seems to me that would be okay elsewhere on the Ballona Wetlands wikipedia site. As a new editor, I am still learning the rules, and am so glad that experience editors, such as yourself, are willing and helpful to help new editors. I hope you and other experienced editors understand what I am attempting to communicate. I feel that I have written entirely too long of a message, so I would like to apologize if I have done so. Thanks again, Magnolia677, for your past communication with such good input and advice for this new editor. Peace, Robert van de HoekRobert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 00:38, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
May 2020
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My name is Robert Jan van de Hoek and I am not born on that date of 1986. Who did this and why? Thanks MuffySeville56 for noticing and making this suspect.Robert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 17:55, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
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Subject ethnicity/previous nationalities/place of birth in lead
Hey! I've noticed both of your edits on both subjects Pramila Jayapal as well as Ted Lieu. Please note that per MOS:Ethnicity which specifies wikipedia rules on biography leads, place of birth, previous nationalities, and/or ethnicity are not included in the leads. Both of these individual's achieved notability in the United States as U.S. citizens and furthermore, Pramila Jayapal's country of birth does not even permit dual citizenship, meaning she does not hold that nationality any longer. If you have any questions, I direct you to Wikipedia's manual for biographies. I am just drawing your attention to this. Apoorva Iyer (talk) 16:35, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
Greetings Apoorva Iyer! I attempted to locate MOS:Ethnicity but did not find the link? I am intereseted to read the guidance and rules that exist.
I agree with you that both of these representives of Congress are notable U.S. citizens.
Interestingly, just as Pramila Jayapal is not allowed to have dual citizenship, I am also not allowed to have dual citizenship with Nederland, which is my place of birth, neither are my parents, both 92 years of age, born in Nederland, who also are not allowed to have dual citizenship between Nederland and U.S.A. I became a naturalized immigrant USA citizen at 10 years of age in 1967, and so did my parents, at the same time, who were 39 years of age, when they became naturalized immigrant citizens of the USA.
Thank you for drawing my attention to the wikipedia manual for biographies. I look forward to looking at the manual, as I like reading biographies and writing biographies of earlier naturalists and natural historians that have written about nature, whether flora or fauna, wildflowers and wildlife, geology, rocks, landscapes.
Did you notice that I used the double brackets to link 'politician' to existing wikipedia sites, and similarliy for both 'Taiwanese American' and 'Indian American' that links to existing wikipedia sites, all of which explain the use of these terms. Both of them are proud to be naturalized immigrant citizens.
Again, thank you so very much for your talking to me via wikipedia. Much appreciated. Be well. Take good care. Peace, 'Roy'Robert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 17:16, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
Hello again, Apoorva Iyer! I noticed that Wikipedia tells me that you do not have a User Page, at least not of this name. I have a user wikipedia autobiography that I have written that may be of interest to you. I would like to know about you as well, as we both are wikipedia editors. Have you considered making your own user page, or do you have one with another name? Peace, Roy.Robert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 17:23, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
Good Afternoon Apoorva Iyer! I am not requesting assistance to find MOS at this time, as I searched further and discovered this acronym indicates Manual of Style, with which I am familiar, but I simply did not recgonize the acronym. I wish to thank you for noting that I refer to the MOS. The ethnicity section is pertinent as noted, with guidance for the opening paragraph that used the term "generally" which is intertretable as suggestive and not a requirement. The guidance introduces the term "notable" as well, and can be interpretated to indicate that being the first congressman or congresswoman of a particular geographic region, who is an immigrant naturalized citizen, further indicating progress being made with any citizen being able to successfully seek elected office, then acknowledging ethnicity in a neutral and objective way is logical and correct for democracy to represent all of us. Peace, Roy.Robert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 19:57, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
Hi! I’m glad you located MOS:Ethnicity. While it does state that the rule is general, it also specifies that the nationality to be mentioned is the one under which the individual attains notability, and normally we don’t include place of birth, ethnicity, or prior nationalities in the lead. Just as former president Barrack Obama, although known for being black, is not described as a “Black american politician and attorney”, but rather simply American, with the qualifiers described later in the lead, it would be similar for these individuals who are not notable primarily for their countries of birth, but rather foremost for their identities as American politicians and only secondarily for their ethnicities/heritage/place of birth. Thanks so much for your response earlier, you are very courteous and I’m sure are a great contributor to Wikipedia. Apoorva Iyer (talk) 22:08, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
Palisades Park / Public art / Totem pole
Hi Robert JVDH: This is Natasha and thanks for the earlier "thanks." I see your recent edit adding better location data for the Totem Pole - great! Got a problem, though, with your new info on the date and donor - could you please include the citation/reference for such? Otherwise it's an unsupported claim hanging there and I'd really like to see your new info kept. Best, TashaB 20:47, 25 August 2020 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Natasha Behrendt (talk • contribs)
Hi Natasha: You are welcome. And thank you for the compliment for better location data. I like that wikipedia has the method to thank editors within the "View history" section. I also now thanked you for moving the tree information to the section on trees. Yes, I agree, there is a problem with needing to give citation/reference for the totem pole. I visited Palisades Park yesterday (August 25, 2020 Tuesday at 5pm) and found the totem pole still there, known since my childhood. The totem pole has a plaque at the base that states it is donated in 1926 by Walter Todd. I made a few photos of the totem pole and the plaque. What do you think about placing a photo of the totem pole for this wikipedia site. I also documented some trees as present with my camera. I am not suggesting the photos of totem pole as a substitute for a reference/citation. I did a google search using the words 'palisades park totem pole santa monica' which found some information about the totem pole. I had considered citing them, but proocastinated doing so, when I added the totem pole narrative. Also, I am not too familiar with adding citation/references, so I steer away from using the references/citation, but I need to do so. You are welcome to add reference/citation for the totem pole if desired. Another earlier editor of this wikipedia site, acknowledged me for adding information on trees, which moved me to do more editing on this wikipedia site/page of Palisades Park. Peace, 'Roy' RJvdHRobert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 11:34, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- Hi again Robert - that's for the above, and I think you're a great "patron" of this Palisades Park article. Who knew it was such an arborist's paradise?! How lucky that you lived (or live) nearby. P.S. Have had to change my username, but am still Natasha - Cheers! TashaB (talk) 19:09, 7 September 2020 (UTC)
Stone pine title
If you think Stone pine isn't the best title, start a WP:RM discussion. But probably you don't want to propose the over-capitalized Italian Stone Pine as you had moved it to, since we don't normally capitalize common names of flora and fauna. Dicklyon (talk) 01:12, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you, Dick Lyon, for the advice. I agree, I do not wish to over-capitalize, as this is not acceptable, even though my preference is to do so. So I do wish to make that change to Italian stone pine, with only Italian capitalized. I also have a prefernce to not use the term, "common name" and instead agree with bird committees that use the term, "English name" and use caps for first letter of bird names. I just looked at WP:RM as suggested, and got confused in the jargon, and not sure how to actually begin the discussion at WP:RM. Would you please guide me there.
- Here is my justication/reason that I put in the reaon box, earlier and is basically still my exact argument.
- "I moved page Stone pine to Italian Stone Pine (In order to avoid confusion with at least one other Stone Pine that is known as the Swiss Stone Pine, showing why a geographical name 'Italian' is appropriate. In addition, books in English in USA and England use the name of Italian Stone Pine. Even the iIntroductory section states that Italian Stone Pine is the commonly known English name for this tree.Robert Jan van de Hoek (talk) 01:57, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- At WP:RM#Requesting a single page move there's a template you can copy into the talk page of the article, put in the new name you want, and the reason. I'll oppose it. Dicklyon (talk) 04:20, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
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