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Hello. I would like to propose edits to this article to correct out-of-date information. I followed the format suggested at WP:EDITXY and Template: Request Edit. As an employee of Pluto TV, I have a conflict of interest - I appreciate the time and effort of the volunteer reviewers, and I will remain available to assist.
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- Specific text to be added or removed: In the lead section, please change the second sentence from:
“Co-founded by Tom Ryan, Ilya Pozin and Nick Grouf in 2013 and based in Los Angeles, California,[1] in the United States, and parts of the rest of the Americas, and Europe, Pluto is an advertiser-supported video-on-demand (AVOD) service that primarily offers a selection of programming content through digital linear channels designed to emulate the experience of traditional broadcast programming (sometimes known as a free ad-supported streaming television or "FAST" service).”
to:
Co-founded by Tom Ryan, Ilya Pozin and Nick Grouf in 2013 and based in Los Angeles, California,[2] Pluto is a free ad-supported streaming television (FAST) service available in the Americas and Europe that primarily offers programming content through digital linear channels designed to emulate the experience of traditional broadcast programming.[3][4]
Reason for the change: Corrects the labeling of service to FAST, which is Pluto’s primary model. Pluto streams live as well. It is not just a video-on-demand platform. Also, the original source does not even mention FAST, so the information in the parenthetical is unsourced, so a source from Variety was added to support the statement. Slightly rewrites for grammar and sentence structure.
- Specific text to be added or removed: In the second paragraph of the lead, after the first sentence that starts “Pluto TV licenses its content directly from providers, and as of March 2020…”
Please add a second sentence:
In October 2020, Pluto TV became part of the newly created ViacomCBS Streaming (renamed Paramount+ on March 4, 2021), both to be led by Pluto TV CEO Tom Ryan.[5][6]
Reason for the change: Significant development for Pluto TV when it became part of the bigger group and its CEO was named to lead both. Adds reliable sourcing from Variety, a leading publication.
- Specific text to be added or removed: In History, in the Early years (2014–2019) subsection, please replace the first sentence: “Pluto TV launched its beta website on March 31, 2014…”
With:
Pluto TV launched its beta website on March 31, 2014, and was co-founded by chairman and CEO Nick Grouf, Tom Ryan, and Ilya Pozin.[7][8] Pluto TV was originally developed to provide curated channels of existing online content, offering a slate of nearly 100 categorized channels featuring content aggregated from various video-sharing platforms (including YouTube, Vimeo, and Dailymotion) as well as additional content provided through partnerships with original web content services and television networks (including Funny or Die, QVC, Refinery29, RocketJump and TYT Network).[7]
Reason for the change: Updated to include founders’ titles, and slightly restructured for grammar, sentence structure and to improve readability. Corrected co-founder’s name from “Thomas” to “Tom” as reflected in the sourcing. Removed excessive, unnecessary details about founders’ previous jobs. Added a new supporting reliable source (Forbes article).
- Specific text to be added or removed: In History, in the Early years (2014–2019) subsection, please replace the source at the end of this sentence: “On March 15, 2018, Pluto TV entered into a partnership with SpotX to provide advertising monetization services for Pluto, including engendering sales from media buyers breaking into over-the-top content services.”
With:
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Reason for the change: The current source is a press release. Replaced with WP: Reliable Source.
RadicalBodhi (talk) 22:44, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
Done — SamX [talk · contribs · he/him] 05:20, 12 April 2023 (UTC)