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Wotnow (talk) 22:31, 24 January 2020 (UTC)
It's been some years since I was notably active in Wikipedia. My circumstances have changed significantly since the peak of my activity. And as I get older, I seem to be busier than ever. Nevertheless, I'm still around, and am intent on further contributions at some time.
For the benefit of administrators, whose own lives will be busy, I'll endeavour to make at least some edits each year, until or unless I get to a point where I can do some serious editing.
If the time comes that I know I can no longer contribute, I'll say so.
Meantime, I thank administrators and other Wikipedians for their efforts in what is a remarkable, and admirable, project.Welcome!
Hello, Wotnow, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:
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Goon Show audio clip
Hi, sorry for not replying to the previous message. I have a bad habit for getting distracted and totally forgetting to reply. Anyway, I'm afraid that clip you have uploaded is much too long for fair use. IIRC, you can't go beyond 30 seconds or 10% of the total length of the source, whichever is shorter.--Drat (Talk) 09:49, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
- I'm inclined to agree with Drat, although I don't thinks the numbers are more than guidelines. For example the poem "Blod" is usually quotes in it's entirety since it is the single word "blod" - even taken with it's title a total of 8 letters means that it is impossible to quote 10%. And indeed it is generally recognised that fair use can include the whole of a very short work, such as a haiku or limerick, or, doubtless, substantially the whole of a longer work when line by line analysis is going to result in the quotation of the entire piece, albeit not in a single chunk. Rich Farmbrough, 03:56, 30 August 2009 (UTC).
Hi again Rich. Thanks for replying so promptly. I see your point, and that of Drat's. I have now managed to reduce the audio clip to minimum requirements, and uploaded that to Last Goon Show of All. I've also utilised the audio file template from the All Along The Watchtower example cited on the Wikipedia:Music_samples page. There remains now the issue of the duplicate audio file page, and the merging of it with the updated one. Your thoughts? Wotnow (talk) 07:17, 30 August 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Also, Drat. Thanks for your replies and patience. As above to Rich, I see your point. I have now managed to reduce the audio clip to minimum requirements, and uploaded that to Last Goon Show of All, where I also deleted my sentence that bordered on analysis - re missing 12 minutes. See also my comments to Rich above. Wotnow (talk) 07:27, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
- OK so I just delete File:Last Goon Show of All - Omitted lead-up to margarine-lump punchline.ogg - and the two long versions of the other file(done).I would say, and we are done? Rich Farmbrough, 07:58, 30 August 2009 (UTC).
Done Rich Farmbrough, 08:42, 30 August 2009 (UTC).
With the feedback and kind cooperation of yourself (and the initial feedback from Drat), the problem regarding the Last Goon show of All clip appears resolved. I commend you both.Wotnow (talk) 21:35, 30 August 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Brachial plexus lesion and injury articles ready to merge
In answer to Joscon, I'm not aware of any specific time-frame other than the act of being reasonable. So if there is much discussion to be had, this should be allowed. If on the other hand, there appears not to be a demand for discussion, and/or if the opportunity presents itself to do a merge before moving on to further article improvements, I would think the idea would be to proceed forthwith.
I have now updated both this Brachial plexus lesion article, and the Brachial plexus injury article so that they are identical apart from the article name. This should make it easy to merge. The only question will be which article is merged into which. I would suggest that the answer to that is whichever term is used most commonly. I have the impression from this exercise that perhaps the term 'injury' is used more commonly than 'lesion'. I note too that the ICD system uses the term injury. Obviously, the article can still be improved upon. However, it may be prudent to do a merge sooner rather than later, while the text in both is identical.Wotnow (talk) 10:49, 11 October 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Merge completed
I reviewed the Help: merging article, and saw that for uncontroversial mergers, it is okay to be bold and simply do it. Since the merge proposal had generated little discussion, and no controversy, I thought I might as well do the merge once I had the text in both articles identical. In the end, none of the content from the lesion article was lost, and indeed it contributed to the injury article. As noted above, it seemed to me from the exercise leading up to the merger, that the term brachial plexus injury is used more often than brachial plexus lesion, especially perhaps by lay-people, but also taking into account the ICD use. I therefore kept the 'injury' title. If it transpires that the term should be changed (which at this stage I doubt), I daresay it's a straightforward enough process to do that. I hope this was of some help. To User: Josconklin I thank you for your comment regarding the merge (that you concurred with my comments, and the question was how long to wait) which helped convince me that I should go ahead with the merge while the opportunity presented itself - i.e. before we had two articles covering the same topic with large amounts of information to reconcile.Wotnow (talk) 12:20, 11 October 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Orphaned non-free image (File:A Dustbin of Milligan.jpg)

Thanks for uploading File:A Dustbin of Milligan.jpg. The image description page currently specifies that the image is non-free and may only be used on Wikipedia under a claim of fair use. However, the image is currently orphaned, meaning that it is not used in any articles on Wikipedia. If the image was previously in an article, please go to the article and see why it was removed. You may add it back if you think that that will be useful. However, please note that images for which a replacement could be created are not acceptable for use on Wikipedia (see our policy for non-free media).
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A Dustbin of Milligan now linked to article.
Hello Skier Dude. I saw your comment re lack of linking of the A Dustbin of Milligan.jpg to an article. Thank you for your prompt.
I have now linked it to the article where I originally intended. I grew up with Milligan's humour, and know it very well. The book is a good representation of his earlier work, and since I happen to have the book, I may get around to creating an article on the it. However, if I don't, at least there is a lead for someone else to follow-up on.Wotnow (talk) 05:58, 22 October 2009 (UTC)Wotnow.
- Thanks - templates updated on image now. Skier Dude (talk) 06:01, 22 October 2009 (UTC)
File reduced - see what you think
Hi again Skier Dude, and thanks for bearing with me. I have now reduced the image size for A Dusbin of Milligan. I hope this suffices, but would welcome your comments on the matter.Wotnow (talk) 06:36, 22 October 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
- I dropped it down to 400x on the longest side - another admin will take care of the follow-up after the mandatory waiting period. Skier Dude (talk) 06:44, 22 October 2009 (UTC)
Fire sale! All items reduced
Thanks again Skier Dude, for both your input and help with the Dusbin of Milligan image. I have now reduced the image for The Bed-Sitting Room, and updated the tag. With all these reductions we could have a fire sale - "All items reduced!". I always wonder about those "20% off" sales - I keep looking for which 20% is missing. Anyway, thanks again, and I trust the Bed-Sitting Room image is satisfactory.Wotnow (talk) 07:12, 22 October 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
- Both look fine! Skier Dude (talk) 07:32, 22 October 2009 (UTC)
Corrected standing and height reductions
Like the sailor with the wooden leg, I stand corrected. I overlooked the Bed-Sitting Room cast, but have now reduced the height (and will avoid bad jokes like platform shoes etc). I trust that does it, and thanks again for your input and help.Wotnow (talk) 07:31, 22 October 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Water cure (therapy) disambiguation from Water cure (torture)
Regarding discussion on the above issue as found at the Talk: Water cure (therapy) page, I make the following observations and suggestions, copied verbatim from my comment there.
Firstly, the definition of Water Cure, as used in that article is misleading. Not because it is wrong. But because it is incomplete.
The first citation in the Water cure article refers to the Oxford English Dictionary, although no further referencing details are given. As readers will be aware, there are several versions of this dictionary, with the most complete being the multi-volume edition typically found only in libraries, to various abridged versions which are more commonly available (and affordable). The two-volume Shorter Oxford English Dictionary (6th ed., 2007) lists the definition for water-cure on page 3586, under the general listing for water (noun), alphabetically in the sub-listing for phrases. It states:
"Water-cure (a) a course of medical treatment by hydrotherapy; (b) a form of torture in which a person is forced to drink large quantities of water".
Thus, there are two primary uses of water: For therapy, and for torture. And thus, two primary definitions in relation to the the topic of discussion.
I would suggest that this gives us the basis for a solution, which is similar to that proposed by Kudpung (talk), with the exception that Water cure (therapy) remains as is, since the title already captures one of the two primary definitions. Thus:
Water cure to Water Cure (torture)
Water cure (therapy) remains as Water Cure (therapy)
This also makes the task easier in the first place. All we need to do is rename the Water cure article. By doing so, we (a) give the reader the two primary definitions, while (b) keeping with the original intentions of the article as being one about the use of water as a form of torture. I hope this is of some help. Wotnow (talk) 03:00, 1 November 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Water therapy redirection
Regarding the suggestion on Talk: Water therapy that the article Water therapy be redirected, I agree. While the article's history is intriguing, the article itself is extremely brief, extremely narrow in scope (certainly not covering the broad category of water therapy) and contains no sources. Its sole merit is that it contains a caveat to mindless drinking of copious amounts of water - i.e. that water intoxication can and does occur.
Its use then, is as a caveat section in a larger article, which is what I propose to do with it. Wotnow (talk) 06:49, 1 November 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Stealing Milligan
Feel free to remove this comment ... but I just read your comment on Spike Milligan talk page. I had three Milligan books stolen -- by the piano movers! I didn't want to turn them in, but ... how low can you get? And in my hardback of "Adolf Hitler" someone sold the book, after cutting out half the title page ... where apparently he signed. What kinds of people do this?? Why not steal from a church or beat up an old lady? Grumble, grumble. Lol. Alpha Ralpha Boulevard (talk) 13:26, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
- Hi Alpha Ralpha Boulevard. A belated reply to your post on my talk page regarding the theft of Milligan books. A moving story. The things people do from need or greed are unfortunate indeed. One consolation is that most of his books are still available, whereas some of his records, including Unspun Socks from a Chicken's Laundry, are as rare as hen's teeth. I guess the reason the folks to whom you refer didn't steal from a church or beat up an old lady would be that:
- Milligan's books are not commonly available in churches. Not even his version of the Bible, for some unknown reason.
- Beating up old ladies with pianos is hard work.
Water Cure (torture)

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- Note that the warning was due to the fact that you tried to disambiguate by performing a cut & paste move, which separated the article from its contributor history for no good reason. A simple use of the movecommand would have served your purpose equally well with less efforts :) I have performed a history merge to re-join the history with the article and created a proper disambiguation page at Water cure.
- If a similar case ever presents itself, please try to avoid copy / pasting entire articles under a new title in favour of using "Move", as the former may lead to the loss of the contribution history if the original page gets deleted, a loss that would constitute a violation of the copyrights of all contributors to the article. If in doubt, you can also ask for assistance at WP:Requested moves.
- Best, MLauba (talk) 13:34, 2 December 2009 (UTC)
Found a 'how to page' related to above discussion. Wikipedia:How to fix cut-and-paste moves. Wotnow (talk) 06:11, 21 January 2010 (UTC)
Water Cure (torture) move
This section, and the sub-section below, are copied and pasted verbatim from my response on the discussion page of MLauba (talk). It is placed here for completion, and for ease of following the discussion, with all relevant discussion in the one place.Wotnow (talk) 20:30, 2 December 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Thanks for your correction of my erroneous methods in disambiguating Water Cure (torture) from Water cure (therapy), and your message on the same. In full accordance with Murphy's Law, after completing the merge, I did actually come across info about the Move process while reading around to see if there was anything else I needed to do to in relation to the move. "Eh? What?", I thought to myself, "so that's what the 'Move' tab can be used for". It certainly did look to be an easier process, and I rather wish I'd kept exploring beforehand. In my attempts to balance the trade-off between reading around and getting things done, I got that one wrong, and I thank you for your correction of it, and your message.
I did consider creating a disambiguation page, and I think it was in reading around on that process that I came across the relevant material on the 'Move' process. I didn't know if I could justify creating a disambiguation page, even though I know that readers would benefit, since most searches on 'Water Cure' are indeed prompted by interest in the therapeutic aspect. It seems almost impossible not to stumble on the 'water cure' term in readings on health from almost any direction - medical, 'alternative medicine', anthropology, sociology, history, etc, whereas in years of reading around, my first ever encounter with the torture definition was via the Wikipedia article.
So thanks again for your efforts at both correction and education. Nice work.Wotnow (talk) 17:51, 2 December 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Water cure (therapy) future merge into Hydrotherapy
I remember now one reason I held off on creating the disambiguation page for Water cure. The Water cure (therapy) article is very impoverished, and I realised at the outset that after taking care of the confusion over 'Water Cure', sorting out the Water cure (therapy) article would logically follow.
The likely outcome of such attention would be a merge of the 'Water cure (therapy)' article into the Hydrotherapy article, since they are essentially one and the same. Water cure as a term has long been interchangeable with 'hydropathy', the earlier term for hydrotherpay, with both water cure and hydropathy becoming more historical terms as time went on. So any attempt to develop the 'Water cure (therapy)' article will inevitably result in two articles [hydrotherapy and 'Water cure (therapy)'] on the same topic.
I knew this from the outset, when I first proposed the solution to the confusion over 'Water Cure' - i.e. start with the definition and go from there. But the torture versus therapy issue was primary (you can't have readers genuinely seeking information, and getting railroaded into one particular viewpoint just because that article got the drop on another article - that's not education, that's marketing, and sometimes worse), and indeed was clouding the 'Water cure (therapy)' = 'Hydrotherapy' issue.
I also knew that the Hydrotherapy article needed improvement. And it struck me that it would probably be better to improve the Hydrotherapy article before picking up on any proposal to merge the Water cure (therapy) article into the Hydrotherapy article.
One question that arises in relation to any future merge of the 'Water cure (therapy)' article into the Hydrotherapy article, is what would happen to the disambiguation page. In my view, there would still be a need for disambiguation, since searchers are still going to look up the term 'water cure', mostly - but doubtless not exclusively - expecting to find something on therapy.Wotnow (talk) 18:41, 2 December 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Merge need not negate disambiguation page
A brief update, for I have no desire to give the impression of wanting to occupy your entire attenton, nor generate a talkfest.
I have just realised that any merge of Water cure (therapy) into Hydrotherapy need not negate the disambiguation page (I have already outlined above why it wouldn't negate the need for disambiguation, but that still left the question of the page). It would just be a matter of bolding the term Water cure (therapy), de-linking it. Since the link to Hydrotherapy is already in the sentence, the sentence itself doesn't even need to change, as an interested reader will most certainly click on the link. So on thinking it through, I've raised a non-issue, for which I apologise. But at least the process of thinking it through is documented for the sake of other readers.Wotnow (talk) 22:08, 2 December 2009 (UTC)Wotnow
Water cures & therapy
Hi Wotnow. Thanks for all your hard work and input on these merge/redirect issues. I precipitated the whole thing when I was creating the article on Malvern Water, but never got round to doing it myself. --Kudpung (talk) 11:16, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
- I think the Malvern Water article is pretty much as complete now as it ever needs to be. I was given a private VIP tour of the bottling factory when I was back home in Malvern in September, where I took many photos, and of wells and spouts in the area, but I haven't had time to update the article since returning to Thailand.--Kudpung (talk) 22:33, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
Quakers and Water Cure
Thanks for you message. I am sorry that I do not know of any C19th Quakers, other than C. Gilpin, who were interested in this subject. Vernon White . . . Talk 20:10, 24 December 2009 (UTC)
Malvern - GA nomination
Hi Wotnow ! Your work with Gyro and the others is excellent - have you considered joining the Wikipedia:WikiProject_Worcestershire ? We now have a first review for GA for the Malvern article. On the whole it doesn't look too bad. As you know, Gyro and I are local residents in absentia, and regular Wiki authors, but anything you can do to improve the language or address some of the more technical points and the other points made by the reviewer as quickly as possible would be much appreciated, particularly with your experience and contribs to the referencing system. It would be great for the Worcs project to have a GA of this envergure in its repertoire. See Talk:Malvern, Worcestershire#GA Review - and Happy New Year!--Kudpung (talk) 04:10, 3 January 2010 (UTC)--
- Hi Wotnow! , while the work you guys are doing on the references is excellent, I would just like to point out the following:
How to format citations: While you should try to format a citation correctly, what matters is that you add your source; provide enough information to identify the source, and others will improve the formatting if needed.
- How to present citations: Each article should use the same method throughout. If an article already has citations, adopt the method in use or seek consensus before changing it.
- This means that the high number of refs must be consistent - quite a mammoth task! I have added lots of new refs in the last day or two, but I don't know how to use your system (yet), as I am more concerned with supplying refs that are required by the GA reviewer. Perhaps you could look them over. You can locate them from the edit history.--Kudpung (talk) 05:52, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
- Cheers Kudpung. Its a privilege to be able to contribute. I'll help out as best I can, although I'm having to pull back from my Wikipedia input while I divert my time and effort elsewhere. The system isn't 'mine' as such. What I did was implement someone's suggestion, do my best to make it work, and show how I got there. However, you'll see from my dialogue that having done this, I have my doubts about the utility of the new referencing layout for this type of article. My own view is that the referencing layout used in Malvern Water article is simpler to implement and more suited to the Malvern, Worcestershire. In other words, it seems more optimal for the Malvern article, whereas the style we're currently trying to implement is more optimal for an article like William Shakespeare
- However, it must be said that I was only able to come to that view after implementing the suggested layout. So it was a useful learning exercise, and the ensuing dialogue did get me to better clarify my observations, which itself is always useful (see the sub-heading Inline citations, editing citations, and referencing layouts). The reason I expressed my doubts early into the new referencing style, was that having realised the issues involved, I had a social responsibility to desribe them as best I could. Thus people could decide which way they'd like to go either early on, or after others have gotten a feel for the issues involved. That is, so people could make informed decisions and indeed perhaps come to a consensus.
- You'll see also that I did get concerned that my expression of doubts might cause discouragement and stall the project. For this reason, I continued to implement the new referencing layout to demonstrate good faith, because discouraging others is not my style. So, having expressed my doubts, and clarified them as best I could, it was then a matter of seeing which direction the consensus would take: The Malvern Water style, or the Wakefield style. I still think the Malvern Water style is more optimal, but I see my role as contributing as best I can whichever direction the consensus goes. And part of that contribution is showing others how they can implement the style they indicate a preference for, insofar as I can figure it out.Wotnow (talk) 07:28, 3 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow

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Hi, we've all had a go at the recommended improvements for GA. Would someone care to have a final proof read please? See comments on Talk:Malvern, Worcestershire/GA1--Kudpung (talk) 14:14, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
Malvern - referencing style
Hi Wotnow, Happy New Year! Having seen your struggle with the tangled web of wiki referencing, I now think your initial feelings were correct, and that the Shakespeare-style refs are not needed for the Malvern article. Would you agree that we should switch back to the Malvern Water style refs? Sorry, I know you've put in lots of hard work here - I guess sometimes we need to try to find out what doesn't work! I think my main concern is that it's just too complicated for most editors to figure out, which can't be good for the maintainability of the article. What do you think? I know you're trying to cut back on wiki-time, so I don't mind making the edits, but I'd like to know your thoughts before I start. GyroMagician (talk) 21:38, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
- Hi GyroMagician. Greetings to you too for the New Year. I concur with your conclusion that the article would be easier to manage using a simpler referencing style, or layout. If we had lots of Smith-type references (or Schoenbaum-type refs, per the Shakespeare article), there would be some gain, from the Shakespeare style. But otherwise, we were building in a level of cumbersomeness with little return for the effort. I also agree that sometimes a bit of trial and error (which after all is just a form of experimentation) is needed to establish what works, what doesn't, and what makes no difference either way. So sure I had my doubts. But I could have been wrong. And if I was right, no harm would be done anyway. Indeed some new Wikibizzo tricks were learned from the exercise of trying to implement it.
- I will, despite myself, continue to make forays into Wikipedia as I can. But the irony is that the very thing which prompted me to contribute in the first place - namely my rather large library - will most likely play a part in me pulling back, as I sort out what to do with it. There are other ironies in this. The article to which I've made the main contribution - Captain R.T. Claridge - was built almost entirely from references found on the internet, with only a handful of references from my library. Similarly for directly and indirectly related articles, as I tacked back and forth while building the Claridge article. I initially thought I might plough through my library and add citations to a range of articles, but while there might be a flurry of activity here and there, that doesn't look too likely now, unless I stumble on a way to achieve that and survive at the same time.Wotnow (talk) 22:29, 3 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
- Hi. I think we have reached the point where all the reviewers original pints have been addressed. Apart from proof reading and correcting any glaring errors, let's try to achiev GA with the article as is. see the revierwers latest comment at Talk:Malvern,_Worcestershire/GA1#Next_set_of_comments. If you need any help understanding referencing policy, don't hesitate to check out these sections:
- Wikipedia:Citing sources#How to present citations
- Wikipedia:Citing sources#Citation templates and tools
- Wikipedia:Citing sources#How to format citations
Thanks. --Kudpung (talk) 07:38, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
- Merging of Malvern Link and Malvern urban district councils. Although I am a Malvernian of some years, and with a great interest in its history, I did not know about this merger until I started searching for material to expand the Malvern article in mid 2009. I could not possibly have put this info in if I hadn't found a source for it. It may have been in Hembry. I can't remember. There would not neccessary have been and Act of Parliament for this, it could happen at local or county level. The irony is, that this mention might not even strictly require a reference. BY referencing things in the Wikipedia that might not strictly need referencing , we are committing ourselves to either providing a verifiable reference, or cutting out the reference, or cutting the material out. At this stage, if we can't find the reference, we'll just have to cut it out. However, the effort at the moment is to comply with the reviewer's recommendations. --Kudpung (talk) 12:08, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
- I see your additions. I'm impressed. Yes, it can take a bit of time. It took a few hours to reformat the refs, but I figured that if I did that, it would free up time of Malvernites to utilise their implicit knowledge. For example, while I did do a Google search re the 1900 merger, I was unsuccessful in the time allocated to the task, achieving only a computer freeze when I visited one historical site. I figured either whoever wrote about that would have spotted it somewhere, and may be more successful than me, with a better idea where to look. Or alternatively, someone with knowledge of Malvern would have a more efficient search heuristic than me. I've now formatted the Hembry Cowie & Cowie ref (1997), and semi-formatted the Young (1991) ref - but it'll pass muster.Wotnow (talk) 18:07, 5 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
- Gyro has suggested I've now been over referncing, so I've cut back on some of the items again that had double or triple refs - HOWEVER, this has left a bunch of ugly red warnings on the front page that I don't know how to fix. usually when I delete an inline ref, it's simply gone for good. URGENT fix please, if you can.--Kudpung (talk) 19:27, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
Hi Wotnow. I've just deleted a whole bunch of over references on Gyro's advice, but I found it extremely difficult but it looks as if I've fixed it. For the moment, I really fail to see how that template system of yours & Gyros for making citations saves any time - if anything it appears to quadruple it. It's now 02.45 am here, and I'm going to bed before I get a divorce suit!--Kudpung (talk) 19:49, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
- We might have a little work to do convincing the troops it was a good idea, but I think the referencing effort is done. I've added a note to the talk page explaining how to use it - I guess we'll have to sit back and watch now. Anyway, I think it looks better, which is what really matters ;-) Thanks for all your help GyroMagician (talk) 20:49, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks again for all your hard work and helping clean up some of the mess I made. I might just come round to your way of thinking on the referencing system and will be experimenting in my sandbox. Please see:
Talk:Malvern, Worcestershire#Consensus
--Kudpung (talk) 03:49, 6 January 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks again for all your hard work and helping clean up some of the mess I made. I might just come round to your way of thinking on the referencing system and will be experimenting in my sandbox. Please see:
Reference templates for the Chienlit innovation
The only templates that I am currently aware of are those created by GyroMagician at GyroMagician's neat trick on Malvern Water discussion page, and more recently GyroMagician's 'Howto' on Malvern discussion page, both of which have been copied by me at User:Wotnow. You'll see from my own userpage, and my comments on Malvern Water discussion page and elsewhere, that I credit my awareness of this referencing style to User:Chienlit's implementation in the Vincent Priessnitz article on 15 November 2009, after which I tried it myself. Whether Chienlit picked up elsewhere or worked it out I don't know. I see the earliest contribution from Chienlit using the {{r|"Ref Name"}} template was on 17 October 2009, in the Hubert Latham article.
But I see the {{reflist|2|refs= ... }} template was added to the Hubert Latham article by User:Autodidactyl on 14 October 2009. Where that editor got it from I don't know. At this stage, it looks a bit like an innovation that's been quietly evolving behind the scenes.
When referencing in an article, I commonly open two, three, or more internet windows. I typically pull up my own page so I can copy-and-paste the {{r|Thisbit}} inline in the article. Then I type whatever name I'm going to use in the lead <ref name="myRefName"> portion of the ref tags. Then I copy-and-paste that over the 'Thisbit'. That method, or variations thereof, ensures that I can see where I'm up to while editing, and if I still overlook something, I'll get a red flag when doing a preview. In my earliest Wikkibizzoing days, the red flags bothered me. I've since learned to see them as very handy.
It's fairly easy to implement the system when implementing new references from scratch. When amending referencing styles, I did find the need to keep track of myself, especially with large change-overs. But as I progressed, I realised it's easier than I thought. One can implement the change piecemeal, as I have done in the Shakespeare article, simply getting the longest references out of the body of the text. The old style - with the full references embedded in the article text - still shows up in the reference section. So one can implement the 'Chienlit innovation' (to give it a name) to the extent one finds it useful, whether total or partial. Or one can implement it in total, but a bit at a time. Very handy indeed.
So we have what we need for now by way of templates on three pages - which is easier than my first method of going into articles where it's been implemented, opening up an editing window, and pinching the formatting from there. Now that I, and GyroMagician in particular, have started to flesh out 'instructions' so that they make sense to us, it may be useful for us to create a couple of special user pages, and see how well we can flesh the template and instructions out, so that a complete novice can follow it. Having done that, a page could be added or submitted to the help-page collection. Unless of course someone else gets there first. But before getting that far, the trick is to implement it and keep debugging our techniques. If it's as useful as Gyro and I (and obviously some others) think it is, it will quietly catch on, and we'll have played our part. Wotnow (talk) 10:38, 6 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
- I do something similar. I can remember to type {{r|Thisbit}} inline, but I can never remember the citation templates, so I keep this page open in another tab, and copy/paste across into the actual <ref>{{Cite...}}</ref> part. There are tools out there to help citation formatting, but I've never found one I really liked, so I keep doing things by hand. GyroMagician (talk) 10:49, 6 January 2010 (UTC)
Some hopefully helpful information
I have added a section to my user page, in which I provide what I hope are Illustrative examples of co-existing referencing styles in the process of editorial problem-solving. I hope it is of some help. As always, it was at least a useful learning exercise for me, as is usually the case when trying to formalise one's own learning into a way that hopefully makes some sense to others. Wotnow (talk) 01:14, 8 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
Awwww, shucks 
Firstly I would like to say thank you to everybody that knows me, and I wouldn't be where I am today without all the support I received from those people who voted to give me this well deserved recognition.
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. I have (truly) never been so flattered. ![]()
Friends, we should render unto Caesar that which is Caesar's. So I must make special mention of Maedin\talk, a beautiful, fresh faced, chirpy young admin (or possibly yet another 50 year old bloke masquerading) who saw a spark of potential in this lost soul and trained me in the art of {{r|..
..}.} Thank you Maedin. Thank you.
Actually I used trial and error after studying how Maedin did it. So, flattered as I am, I would happily vote for the 'Maedin innovation'. If you knew how many times I typed {r|.... and the hours I wasted searching, you would feel the 'Chienlit discontinuity' to be more appropriate.
ps. My biggest leap of faith was when I timorously attacked the huge/awful Archaeopteryx and was delighted to find that the scientific heavys accepted the improvements.
Regards Chienlit (talk) 10:12, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
- Hi Wotnow,
- I have not been able to make the 'Maedin innovation' work inside ==Notes=.= {{reflist|group=n}.}. Thus on Thomas Humber I resorted to putting them outside, which means that for the casual reader the ref is about a mile above the note. ( eg. <r.e.f group="n">The Stanley Cycle Club organised ....</r.e.f>{{r|NYT 7 Feb 1897}.}{{r|Graces}.}
- Do you or GyroMagician et al know how to embed a MaedInnov inside the actual note? Regards Chienlit (talk) 10:51, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks. It was also 'Maedin who instructed Autodidactyl. She is the source/promoter of the innovation.
- I use the option to display the article's section index on the edit screen, I find it easiest to write the whole thing 'inline' {{r|Chien}}<ref name="Chien" >[www.chien...]</ref>, then paste the stuff into references. Regards Chienlit (talk) 12:20, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
- The ==Notes== {{reflist|group=n}} function allows 'interesting asides', background, and 'semi-non sequiturs' to be contained in the article without breaking the reader's flow. I also use them for stuff that is probably the start of a new article, but not yet, a protolink. They are very useful for cleaning up articles without destroying facts. Regards Chienlit (talk) 12:53, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
- Well, thanks chaps, I didn't know I'd had something named after me! And my tints, too, how surreal! I owe my discovery of the clever reference formatting to the Wikipedia Signpost, which I almost never read, but which, by grace and good fortune, I happened to peek at in just the right week to see this new feature. As far as I know, some über-smart editors around here designed and pushed for the change, so they are far more worthy of mention than I, ;-) Though, really, MaedInnov is such a cool name! Maedin\talk 13:08, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
- Here you go, the three paragraphs that led me to it. It looks as though perhaps User:Dragons flight is your man. Having stumbled upon it in September, I went on a short re-referencing spree, mostly to the articles I've had at DYK. Au revoir, Maedin\talk 13:22, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
- Hi, Thanks for Thomas Humber. I think I have found an even neater format, it works exactly like the standard template but with the addition of group=Note in both the inline label and the ==Notes section header. Regards Chienlit (talk) 00:33, 14 January 2010 (UTC) (ps Your user page embarrassed/stimulated me into finishing Ernest Shackleton. It was a sod. Sisyphus had it easy.)
Finnhorse
Wotnow, I don't object to your editing the Finnhorse article, but your citation format is not in line with the rest of the article, so could you kindly fix your cites so they are properly done? Thank you. You also do not put footnotes into the lead, per WP:MOS. In addition, the term "coldblood," though accurate, is often viewed as insulting in English use, implying coarse and slow horses, even if the equivalent term is used in other languages -- "light draught" covers the same basic type and is less apt to be viewed in a derogatory way. Montanabw(talk) 00:02, 7 January 2010 (UTC) Follow up: I restored the Equus collection citation, correctly, and put it in some of the more obvious places where the wording is pretty similar to that in the article. It doesn't have to be included in every spot that has a citation already, unless the existing cite is incorrect. The other two cites appeared irrelevant save for their reference to the term "coldblood" used in passing. Montanabw(talk) 00:38, 7 January 2010 (UTC)
Undo
In this edit you undid an edit. In general you would be totally correct, but may I suggest that if you want to undo an edit where the edit summary uses the term "banned user" you should take a different approach. There are certain long-term abusers of Wikipedia where it has been agreed that the best strategy is to completely remove the work of their sockpuppets. I noticed the change and decided not to bother fixing it because it only involved a dab page: not a big deal and will be fixed in due course. However, if wanting to fix it, I would recommend just making the edit with a suitable summary ("fix dab") with no reference to what you are really doing (restoring the banned user's work). The edit in question is pretty inconsequential and the only reason I'm mentioning it is that many articles are being cleaned in a similar fashion, and you may encounter another case. Johnuniq (talk) 02:42, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for your message. Despite reverting your edit, I was glad someone pays attention to these things. I thought how to handle it at the time (here's a banned editor and another person making a good faith reversion), so I had a quick glance at the banned editor's recent contributions. At a glance, they seemed in context, so I thought 'oh well, may as well reinforce constructive behaviour'.
- I subsequently had a closer look at some of that editor's recent edits, and I get a sense of the concern. E.g. inserting sentences which appear to be about getting a viewpoint across rather than contributing to the article. Or inserting a sentence which in and of itself seems not unreasonable, but that breaks up the flow of and meaning of a paragraph, etc. On this last instance, I myself have 'The Third Culture'. after prompting by an academic whose own discipline, if not herself, leans in favour of the Dawkins school of thought - in contrast to the motivation that seems behind the banned editor's instertion (hence my mention). And I do think it is worth at least listing in the Dawkins article, because it's part of the great 'debate' that captivated and indeed imfluenced many, especially while Gould was alive. But I wouldn't just deliberately chuck reference to it into the middle of a paragraph in such a fashion that it disrupts the entire context (this added for completion and sense of dialogue).
- So I thank you for bearing with me, and in particular for your comment. This was a first for me (there's a few of those as Wotnow wantonly wanders wondrously, wearily wikibizzoing within Wikipedia). But I'll heed your advice in any future such situations. Wotnow (talk) 03:15, 10 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
- Thanks for your message on my talk. Just to clear up any misunderstanding, you did not revert my edit – I have been sensitive to the issue because I noticed a lot of work done by the "undoing" administrator who is trying to clean up. These cases are very rare, but to explain one further point, the particular sock may have been doing excellent work where all the edits were unambiguously wonderful, but the edits would still be entirely deleted. If you haven't encountered these situations before that can sound very strange, but I assure it is essential in the long term. I know nothing about the particular case, but I have seen others. Johnuniq (talk) 03:26, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
- Like a sailor with a wooden leg, I stand corrected. You're right: I was reverting the reversion of something which was itself not your edit. I have seen the occasional situation where something seems not quite right but I can't put my finger on it (other than indirectly highlighting it for others to check out), and I think I see the point you're making, re the long-run gain from not giving licence to some forms of behaviour. Wotnow (talk) 03:46, 10 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
What happens if I do this?
Malvern GA, failing...
Hi Wotnow, I know you guys have gone to a lot of trouble over this new referencing system, but it probably came at the wrong moment after the article had already been submitted for GA. It's now created a bit of a muddle and is seriously interfering with the reviewer's efforts to get the article GA'd before the time limit runs out and has to be failed. It would be great if you and Gyro could do everything possible to sort these multiple issues out as quickly as possible - I'm afraid that I am completely useless and unable to help with it. See: Talk:Malvern,_Worcestershire/GA1#Final comments. Other than correcting the references, please do not make any other edits at this stage. Thanks.--Kudpung (talk) 03:44, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, while there was no substance to the issues raised, it takes considerably longer to answer such things than to raise them. I was in the process of trying to answer the issues as you posted this message. And I see GyroMagician has made some changes already. If there's something constructive I can do, I will. I gather you've got some life experience Kudpung, so you'll know that in the end Kudpung, it always comes down to goodwill. If goodwill is present, resolution is always possible. If for some reason goodwill is not present, barriers keep arising and while resolution is not impossible, it is at best difficult. Wotnow (talk) 04:20, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
- Life experience? Dunno - simply spent 30 yrs giving boring lectures to undergrads and grads in murky universities around the world, and writing equally boring tomes ;) One of my favourite expressions, particularly heard in Buddhist societies like the one I live in, is: There are no problems - only solutions. Here we avoid confilct at all cost, even if it means nothing finally gets done! --Kudpung (talk) 05:03, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
- I would like to mention how excellent I found your explanation to Dona on her talk page. Ironically, it demonstrates far more the results that collaboration and discussion can achieve, than the actual issue at stake (referencing). For my part, I have no urgent or immediate intention to adopt the new template system, or in fact any template system for inline references, because:
- Habit - this old dog learns new tricks on a learning curve that's got a bit slow.
- Any changes require two separate interventions (to the text, and to the template in the reflist)
- Cutting and pasting stuff from one article to another complete with their embedded refs is not possible, while many Malvern, and indeed Worcesteshire related articles share, or will be share the same snippets of text with their embedded sources that are copied and pasted between articles.
- Nevertheless, I am confident that if you wish to adopt this style for the other articles in the project, there will be no objections, and I'm sure that if you do, you will modify my simple inline tags for me if and when required, until I have finally learned to use the system myself.--Kudpung (talk) 05:24, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
- On your 30 years teaching. The repetitive stuff would feel tedious I guess. I recall that once, when I speculated how interesting a fellow's job looked (it required skill and good problem-solving), he replied to me that no matter what job one does in life, at some point it gets repetitive. I presume there were inspiring moments when dealing with students you could see progressing in leaps and bounds. Such highlights offset the drudgeries of life.
- I would like to mention how excellent I found your explanation to Dona on her talk page. Ironically, it demonstrates far more the results that collaboration and discussion can achieve, than the actual issue at stake (referencing). For my part, I have no urgent or immediate intention to adopt the new template system, or in fact any template system for inline references, because:
- My 'advocacy' regarding referencing styles, or anything else for that matter, would be tolerance of unproblematic difference. When people use catchy phrases like 'biodiversity', they can overlook that this is just a form of heterogeneity. And heterogeneity tends to add robustness to any system, whether it be a diversity in a business environment, statisitcal analysis, 'brainstorming' sessions etc. Same phenomenon in different context. So my user page doesn't just elaborate on the style. It also demonstrates coexisting styles, contains caveats for the converted, and a link to a featured article that is referenced in the free-hand style you utilise. If at some point you find the 'list-defined' style advantageous, you'll use it. If not, I would advocate that it shouldn't matter. All that matters in the end is that what's contained in a reference is sufficient to track down the source (the more obscure the source, the more important the detail), and we do well not to lose sight of that. Wotnow (talk) 06:22, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
Northamptonshirre, Worcestershierre, Warwickshierre, and Everyshierre
Hello Wotnow! A non-British user seems to be attempting to suggest that the Brits are not pronouncing their own British place names correctly, and appears to believe that it is a policy of Wikipedia to instruct the Brits, through the use of the IPA, how British English should be pronounced. He/she also seems to be of the opinion that it is Wikipedia policy to regard British English by default as a rhotic language, which it is not. Some British Wikipedians are trying to avoid an edit conflict and have requested my support. I have added my comments to the debate the non-British user has has started in defence of his/her multiple, WP:BOLD? changes to IPA pronunciations of British place names. As a professional linguist I accord every version of English its own particular merits and my position here strictly concerns the way in which the IPA is interpreted and applied in the Wikipedia, and how the current policy may need to be changed through a truly representative consensus. If you would like to help resolve this issue, please see User talk:Kudpung#IPA, RP, etc. and User talk:Lfh#Warwickshire to get the background. Maybe you could then chime in with your views on the subject at Wikipedia talk:IPA for English#Rhoticity in place names. Thanks. --Kudpung (talk) 20:58, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
CONGRATULATIONS!
You are now the proud owner of this badge - wear it with pride :) --Kudpung (talk) 23:00, 12 January 2010 (UTC) Cheers Kudpung. Congratulations back, to you and the rest of the team. A good team effort all round, and a privilege to participate in. And of course Dana boomer deserves thanks, which I see you've done, and which I wholeheartedly concur with. Wotnow (talk) 00:15, 13 January 2010 (UTC)
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GA reviews
Hi Wotnow, I just though I'd let you know that we may have been submitted to a GA review that insisted on a quality that might actually have gone beyond the GA criteria. This for example from the GA guideline page: Well-written: (a) the prose is clear and the spelling and grammar are correct; and (b) it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation. [1]^ Compliance with other aspects of the Manual of Style is not required for good articles.
There is definitely no insistence that the referencing system follows any pattern at all, and even ugly bare URLs are allowed, while retrieved dates, book citations, publishers, are not required. Not that I'm complaining because the experience has set the standard for my own work that was probably never far off the mark anyway. But it's food for thought if ever we review anyone's articles.--Kudpung (talk) 13:45, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
GA review, coincidental phenomena, and a raft of analogies
- Cheers Kudpung. I did wonder myself, although for slightly different reasons. The GA culmination coincided with me stumbling into someone's "territory" and eliciting a remarkable over-reaction containing claims unsustainable by evidence readily available throughout Wikipedia. In the process of drafting a response (which I never did post), I did the logical thing, which is to find examples highlighting the spuriousness of the claims. You can see this from my contribution history. All this coincided with the culmination of the GA review, which itself coincided with us working through the referencing question. So it would be understandable for someone to wonder whether this "pattern of behaviour" meant anything to worry about.
- Note of course the crux of the issue WE were dealing with was the layout - e.g. Wakefield/Shakespeare vs Malvern Water/Richard Dawkins. The underlying Wikibizzos were a by-product dialogue. This dialogue was important in itself. But it had no real meaning in isolation from the layout question which was the crux of the issue. A bit like genetics. Gotta get a handle on the genotype, but it's the phenotype people are interested in, whether it be animal breeding, human conditions, etc. One cannot admire the colour patterns of, nor parade and ride a horse genotype. One can only admire, parade and ride the horse phenotype.
- So our Wiki markup and layout dialogues are reminiscent of the genotype-phenotype dialogues found in the Dawkins vs Gould camps, with some focusing on the hidden genotype as the unit of measurement by natural selection, and some on the phenotype as the unit of measurement. The Wiki markup of is the genotype analogue, while the overall layout seen by a reader is the phenotype. My own stance is reminiscent of Gould's. That is, that of course the genotype is of significance, without which there is no phenotype. But the environment does not "see" the genotype. It sees, and thus selects for or against, the phenotype. Remarkable parallel really, although unsurprising.
- If a principle has any universal value, it will be found across a range of phenomena. So natural selection, while a phylogentic process, is nevertheless a process found at the ontological level. Neurogenisis in a developing brain is exactly that - natural selection on an ontological scale. Then there's natural selection processes in markets, of language itself, etc.
- And of course we've dealt with some of the universal issues of linguistics: syntax and semantics (itself analogous to structure and function, just as anatomy and physiology is, all of which leads one to the principle that structure governs function, which leads back to to our own dialogues), or emic and etic (itself borrowed from anthropology but applicable to linguistics). All universal phenomena, the understanding of which is enhanced by stepping back and looking for where parallel processes may be seen, albeit under different names. For example, Heinz Kohut's "experience near" vs "experience far" is the psychoanalytic equivalent of emic vs etic. Sociologists too have their equivalents, and on it goes.
- In the case of genotype-phenotype analogies, language itself will be amenable to this, which linguists such as you Kudpung, and others, will be in better position than me to know about. Even if you haven't previously thought of it in that fashion, you'll have no trouble grasping the concept and thinking of examples. And it's a safe bet that someone has written on the subject from that angle. You see in this yet another influence of Gould's style on me. Using the specific to explicate the general. Of course, he was a master at that, as Dawkins himself has readily acknowledged (I'll bet he misses his most worthy opponent). Regards Wotnow (talk) 00:16, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
- Hi Wotnow, I was not making any analogies to the way you and/or Gyro addressed the referencing system in either the Malvern or the Malvern water articles. I think the experiment was a necessary experience that will help determine the best systems to use for different kinds of articles. The main thing to keep in sight is that a Wikipedia article is not a university paper and its presentation and referencing should address even the visitor who may not normally read anything more intellectual than a local brochure of events and hotels. It is here that I feel we may have been forced into an academic situation by our reviewer, and that it has in fact pushed the Malvern article unnecessarily very close to Featured Article status. I mention all this because I've recently been ticked off by ther reviewer of an article I was helping out with, for verifying and cleaning up the referencesso that they at least display the correct syntax, have 'Retrieved' dates, and do not display bare URLs. I did a lot of checking before I nominated Malvern for review, during the Malvern review, and again since my recent reprimand, and I was never able find specific instructions to GA reviewers on the points I raised, so obviously the standards practiced vary widely. The irony in all this is that with Malvern we now have an article that could probably be safely nominated for Featured Article! --Kudpung (talk) 01:30, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
- Cheers Kudpung. The analogies are down to me. It's one of my quirks. One can't unfortunately understand everything (and some of the more unsavoury aspects of the human condition one would rather not have understood, or more correctly, would rather not be true). But one can try to grasp the more universal aspects of underlying principles, which I guess is what I try to do, with varying degrees of success. Again I credit writers like Oliver Sacks, or especially Gould (but even the aforementioned tutor), for inspiration in this regard.
- Hi Wotnow, I was not making any analogies to the way you and/or Gyro addressed the referencing system in either the Malvern or the Malvern water articles. I think the experiment was a necessary experience that will help determine the best systems to use for different kinds of articles. The main thing to keep in sight is that a Wikipedia article is not a university paper and its presentation and referencing should address even the visitor who may not normally read anything more intellectual than a local brochure of events and hotels. It is here that I feel we may have been forced into an academic situation by our reviewer, and that it has in fact pushed the Malvern article unnecessarily very close to Featured Article status. I mention all this because I've recently been ticked off by ther reviewer of an article I was helping out with, for verifying and cleaning up the referencesso that they at least display the correct syntax, have 'Retrieved' dates, and do not display bare URLs. I did a lot of checking before I nominated Malvern for review, during the Malvern review, and again since my recent reprimand, and I was never able find specific instructions to GA reviewers on the points I raised, so obviously the standards practiced vary widely. The irony in all this is that with Malvern we now have an article that could probably be safely nominated for Featured Article! --Kudpung (talk) 01:30, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
- And your point is exactly that which I would make regarding the readership. Sure, specialists will peruse Wikipedia, for the same reason they peruse any populist writings - namely, that insights, good explanations, and good sources, are by no means exclusive to the "heavy" literature. Indeed some of the best explantions in any field are those written so a lay-reader can understand them. Moreover, this is an important yardstick for many specialists. But Wikipedia's main readership must necessarily be lay-readers from a wide range of backgrounds. So if in the end, they can make sense of a subject, and locate its sources if they want to or need to, the article has done its job.
- I also concur that the whole process for the Malvern article did it more good than harm. And us too. It added to the quality of the article, and got us wrapping our heads around some things we'd not previously tried to wrap our heads around, and which we now know others have also grappled with, albeit in piecemeal fashion, from quite different directions. Wotnow (talk) 04:48, 18 January 2010 (UTC)

