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Figure 1

The diagram needs a couple of corrections. "Mount Herman School" (upper left corner) should be "Mount Hermon School" or "Mt Hermon School"; a little north of Ghum (should that be Ghoom, as in the third line of the third paragraph under Culture?) is the "Batista Loop" ... this should be "Batasia Loop".
The roads don't match what's shown in Google maps. South of Darjeeling railway station the three roads to the east are labelled Nehru Rd, Dr Zakir Husain Rd, and Tenzing Norgay Rd; Google Maps labels the first as Gandhi Rd, and the second as St Mother Teresa Rd (aka Dr Zakir Hussain Rd (note the spelling of Hussain) and Jalapahar Rd) which joins Gandhi Rd at Ghoom. Google maps shows no Lebong Park Rd. The road past St Andrews church seems to be NCC Rd.
Maybe show the watercourses (jhora) in blue? (This is the usual convention).
Tiger Hill is actually about 5½ km SSE of its marked location. Prisoner of Zenda (talk) 07:24, 30 July 2022 (UTC)

Thank you very much. It's quite possible that the set of maps I used as a model were older. The problem with some of the roads is that they change names as they pass into different stretches. The spelling errors, of course, are all mine. I will make the corrections, of course, but let me mull this over. Perhaps a schematic map with fewer details might be more appropriate with a clear warning that it is not drawn to scale. Best, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:41, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
@Prisoner of Zenda: Sorry for not getting around to fixing the errors in the map. I won't draw a new map but will correct the more glaring errors. The "Batista" loop error shows that my mild dyslexia, brought to notice as a child by my mother when I was reading "Greyfriars" as "Greyfairies," is very much still there. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:23, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
@Prisoner of Zenda: Hello. I have corrected the errors you have pointed out. Ghoom seems to be spelled Ghum on WP, and apparently officially in West Bengal. So for the train station I have Ghum/Ghoom; for the monastery I let the Ghum remain. It was in a cluttered label space. I've tried to correct the road labeling as much as I could. Nehru has gone; Zakir Husain is now Zakir Hussain and shares billing with Saint Mother Teresa Rd., Gandhi turns into NCC road in the north and joins Jalapahar Road in the south. Tiger Hill has gone! Move to an right-pointing arrow at the bottom, "To Tiger Hill." The springs are all in blue now. Well more like azure, but it seemed more attractive to me in the mood I was in. And Mt Herman of course is Mt Hermon. The change might not show in the "thumb" version just yet, but if you click on it, you'll see it.
In any case, here it is: File:Map of Darjeeling Municipality, Darjeeling District, West Bengal India.jpg If any errors remain, or if you have any other suggestions for improvement, please let me know. Thanks again for this extraordinarily helpful post. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:09, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
Oh, and the Cuban dictator is now Batasia. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:20, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks for the changes, Fowler&fowler - and for the humour! Prisoner of Zenda (talk) 11:17, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

TFA request

Putting this malformed request here, as no one will be able to find it in the future (listed at another article's request page):

SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:35, 30 July 2022 (UTC)

And the blurb:

We use one paragraph only, with no reference tags or alternative names; the only thing bolded is the first link to the article title. The length when previewed is between 925 and 1025 characters including spaces and (Full article...) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:11, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

Gorkhaland movement in lead?

As of this version, the lead does not mention Gorkhaland movement. I feel this needs a mention in the lead, unless it is considered as a recenticism. Perhaps right after the sentence "Although their common language, the Nepali language, has been given official recognition at the state and federal levels in India, the recognition has created little meaningful employment for the language's speakers nor has it increased their ability to have a significantly greater say in their political affairs."? Fowler&fowler, please see. Thanks, --Dwaipayan (talk) 16:57, 7 August 2022 (UTC)

Just added.That's an excellent point. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:06, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
Added the adjective separatist before Gorkhaland movement in the lead.--Dwaipayan (talk) 05:13, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
Dwaipayan. I'm sorry but the modern sources we are using don't use that word. In Middleton and Shneiderman (2018), for example, "separatist" or "separatism." is used just one and that is in a quote from the 1950s, "separate" is used 46 times. We can't use "separatist," but we can parphrase their numerous authors including themselves, "a movement for a separate state of "Gorkhaland" within India." The Gorkhaland movement page itself says, "The Gorkhaland movement is a campaign to create a separate state of India in the Gorkhaland region of West Bengal for the Nepali speaking Indians." Fowler&fowler«Talk» 10:26, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
We can say, "These factors led to a movement for a separate state in India for Nepali-speaking Indians in northernmost regions of West Bengal." and link movement to Gorkhaland movement Fowler&fowler«Talk» 10:37, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
I've thought about it some more, Dwaipayan. There is a longish paragraph in history. I don't think a mention of Gorkhaland is warranted. The sentence we have is the best summary of that paragraph. I've very sorry, but we can discuss this further. I've removed Gorkhaland. In any case, the sentence had time-incoherence.
The paragraph begins with: Darjeeling's population today is constituted largely of the descendants of the indigenous and immigrant labourers ... to then start a sentence on history is confusing. I am deeply sorry for this. I should have paid attention earlier. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:31, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
Hi! No issues :) I guess "separatist" is a term which has negative connotation, and hence could be sensitive. So, I agree with you (plus the fact that modern sources are not using that term frequently) not to use the term. It was likely used in media when the movement was portrayed to be more militant in nature, perhaps in 1980s.
Whether the mention of Gorkhaland movement should be in the lead: I still think it should be. We can postpone this discussion after the TFA appearance though. On the day of TFA, some editor may add it. Let's see. For the time being, let's agree not to rock the boat :)--Dwaipayan (talk) 13:16, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
We could say: .. nor has it increased their ability to have a significantly greater say in their political affairs, as pressed for in the Gorkhaland movement.
But then were are funnelling a general statement into something particular; someone might say the GM is only one aspect of the generally felt need for a greater say in their affairs. Becomes complicated for me. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 14:51, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
Let's not add it (Gorkhaland movement) in the lead, at least for now.--Dwaipayan (talk) 15:40, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • "The 20% drop from 1990 to 1995 was attributed in the study to India's economic liberalisation which came into force in the very early 1990s". Which study? No specific study is mentioned immediately before this sentence. Dwaipayan (talk) 18:10, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
Dwaipayan are you talking about the last paragraph of Economy? Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:43, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
Yes, the last paragraph of economy Fowler&fowler.--Dwaipayan (talk) 02:10, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
The 20% is cited to Roy and Biswas (2017), who say on page 29, "Table 3.5 shows that the number of tea gardens decreased from 102 to 83 during the period 1990–1995, i.e., which is around 19 percent. Since, we understood that the year 1991 as the starting of a new economic policy that advocated the doctrine of LPG (liberalization, privatization, and globalization) policy. The new economic policy might have caused a decline in the number of tea gardens in the Darjeeling hills.
The next sentence is cited to Brown, Scrase, Scrase-Ganguly (2017) who say on p. 535 "The tea industry, which does provide some ‘middle-class’ positions in management and distribution, has been in continual decline in recent decades. Indian tea has performed poorly since liberalisation, being hit by price drops. In Darjeeling in particular, plantation owners have invested surpluses in other, more profitable industries outside of Darjeeling, leading to a decline in productivity."
Those are the two 2017 studies. I'm not sure why I changed 19% to 20%; perhaps I was thinking the numbers of tea gardens are small numbers, they went down from 102 to 83. This is not exactly the arena in which the battle for precision should be fought, even 19% is an approximation (i.e. it is better to be precise in things such as output in thousands of tons etc.) and also perhaps that 20% or 1/5th most people understand. 19% is a tricky one. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 02:59, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
Hi! My comment is not about the numerical value. Rather, the text should read something like, "According to a 2017 study, the 20% drop is attributed to ...". In this version, the sentence reads "...attributed in the study to ...", but no study is mentioned in the sentence or preceding sentence. --Dwaipayan (talk) 03:40, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
Good catch. Fixed now. The first was a 2021 study. Please take a look. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 19:07, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
PS Noting that was for Dwaipayan Fowler&fowler«Talk» 19:08, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

English pronunciation needed

Nice to have the Bengali and Nepali pronunciations in the first line of the intro, but the English pronunciation would be even more useful for English Wikipedia, especially for a TFA. Congratulations and thanks to all of have worked to get this article where it is. —  AjaxSmack  12:16, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

Thanks, Ajax Smack for the kind words. Let me think about it some more. I could put the English IPAs in a footnote. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 13:07, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
Can this also be addressed? Someone had introduced a dab link; I don't know which to pick. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 14:49, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
Done. Linked to Classical Tibetan given that the etymology is linked to Sanskrit mythology Fowler&fowler«Talk» 16:28, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
OK, AjaxSmack, I've added the pronunciations in British and American Englishes and cited to OED (subscrip reqd). They are in a footnote immediately after the Bengali and Nepali. Please correct if you see any errors. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:31, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
user:AmazingJus Can we do /dɑ(r)ˈdʒilɪŋ/?
@Fowler&fowler: I would say that's a good compromise and many dictionaries actually use that format. However, Wikipedia only does not do that with rhotics, only with other consonants and only if they're in the same accent. — oi yeah nah mate amazingJUSSO ... [ɡəˈdæɪ̯]! 09:39, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

The TFA

Darjeeling was viewed by 53,556 people on TFA day, August 15, 2022. The next day 11,865 people viewed the page. Here are the statistics relative to the other recent TFAs. Let's hope the one-day-limelight will have created more lasting interest in the page. (In relative terms the Royal necropolis article did best, but then interest dropped quickly soon after. Speed of light did better but than Darjeeling, but they've always had more readers) Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:37, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

Our one day average for the year ending 14 August was 1,094 page views So we jumped 50-fold (48.95-fold to be precise). Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:47, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

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