Talk:Elizabeth Bentley

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"Her death passed..."

The passage "Her death passed with relatively little notice" is supported and documented by the next sentence in the article, which describes the level of notice given to the death of Whittaker Chambers. The roles played by Bentley and Chambers were comparable in many ways, so it's valid to look at the notice given Bentley's death relative to that of Chambers. RedSpruce (talk) 15:07, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

On second thought, I think this passage should be more specific about the nature of the coverage of her death, with a comparison to Chambers clearly stated rather than simply juxtaposing the two people in the text. I'll work something up when I get a chance. RedSpruce (talk) 16:00, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

Hi, RAN. Among your recent edits, one was made with this comment" "restore quote to show that "Her death passed with relatively little notice" is incorrect." Perhaps you could explain to me why it is necessary to show that a statement is incorrect when that statement is no longer in the article. I could also explain to you that the statement isn't incorrect, but that isn't necessary, since it's no longer in the article. RedSpruce (talk) 10:34, 8 May 2008 (UTC)

New section heading "Death"

The text in this deals with more than her death. The text noting the posthumous verification of Bentley's story is quite important to the overall story. The section could be called "Death and subsequent validation" or something like that, but that's an awkward mouthful. RedSpruce (talk) 15:11, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

RAN, your solution was to restore a "Death" section and add a "Legacy" section. In this form the article ends with 3 extremely short sections, which is stylistically awkward and unnecessary. The heading "Aftermath" is general enough to cover what you made into three sections. Also, "Legacy" isn't the correct word, since it refers to something that a person leaves behind after their death. The content of this section was about the posthumous validation of Bentley's story, not about any "legacy." RedSpruce (talk) 10:40, 8 May 2008 (UTC)

Death

I have rearranged the references, and restored the Washington Post AP obit to reinforce that "Her death passed with relatively little notice". I think an obit in the New York Times, Washington Post, and Time magazine dispels this. The extra reference makes sure that anyone who read or cited the article while that information was there, now has the correct information. After all, if you still aren't convinced, how can I convince others who will be reading in the future or have read it in the past. --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk) 12:26, 8 May 2008 (UTC)

So some past readers of this article might have misinterpreted the statement "Her death passed with relatively little notice", and you want to repair that misinterpretation among those readers who read that past version of the article, misunderstood it, and are now revisiting the article. That's certainly a unique reason for making an edit. Luckily your edit doesn't do much harm, so I'm willing to leave it for the time being.
I say "misinterpret" the statement, because that's what you're doing. The word "relatively" is key. It means her death received little notice, compared with someone else. That someone else, of course, is Whittaker Chambers, who was and is mentioned in the immediately following text. Even without the word relatively" to make explicit the fact that there's a comparison to be made, "little notice", "minimal notice", etc. are relative terms with no absolute meaning. They only mean something when there's a point of comparison. (The sitting president of the US? An anonymous homeless person?) In this case, the article has always made it clear (to all readers except you, apparently) that the point of comparison was Whittaker Chambers. Compared to Whittaker Chambers, Bentley's death received "little" notice. I hope this clarifies the text that was in the past version of this a article for you. RedSpruce (talk) 16:39, 8 May 2008 (UTC)

Bentley's middle name

RAN, Although my edit summary comment here was justified based on the content of your footnote (and on your history of not understanding the difference between trivial and non-trivial content), on further research it turns out that this isn't a matter of a simple typo. The two published biographies of Bentley are actually in disagreement on this point: Clever Girl gives Bentley the middle name "Turrell" and Red Spy Queen uses "Tirrell". This still wouldn't be worth mentioning if it was only one article in Time that used this "alternate spelling", but as it turns out, many sources do. When I get a chance I'll add a footnote to the article noting this. RedSpruce (talk) 15:24, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Trivia, unnecessary repetition

Richard Arthur Norton's (RAN) recent edits to the article add the following:

The footnote regarding the spelling of Bentley's middle name reads (prior to RAN's addtion): Sources are divided on the correct spelling of Bentley's middle name. Kathryn Olmsted's biography spells it 'Terrill', while Lauren Kessler's uses 'Turrell'.
RAN adds the following: Time magazine uses "Elizabeth Turrill Bentley" and the Associated Press uses "Elizabeth Terrill Bentley." This is more coverage of an extremely trivial point than any reader will ever want. It also makes a false statement: it is not known that Time and the NY Times always used these respective spellings when they printed Bentley's name, but the text incorrectly asserts this.

Repetition through redundant footnote quotations; RAN's edit adds the following text in the form of source quotations in footnotes:

  1. Elizabeth Terrill Bentley, self-styled courier for a Communist spy ring, told a reporter today she was born New Year's Day 40 years ago in New Milford, Conn.
  2. Elizabeth Bentley, the apostate Communist agent who helped unmask a web of wartime red treachery in this country, died quietly today. She was 55.
  3. Elizabeth Bentley, a Soviet spy in the United States during World War II who later aided the United States, died today in Grace-New Haven Hospital. She underwent surgery for an abdominal tumor yesterday.
  4. Elizabeth Turrill Bentley, 55, onetime Communist whose disclosures of wartime Soviet espionage led to the conviction of more than a dozen top Reds between 1948 and 1951; following surgery for an abdominal tumor; in New Haven, Conn.

Except for the name of the hospital where she died, none of these footnote quotations add a single piece of information to the article. Not only do they all repeat information already in the article, the last 3 all repeat each other. Well-written articles do not repeat the same information four times over.

RedSpruce (talk) 16:58, 30 May 2008 (UTC)

Response

Actually I made the discovery that there are two versions of her name here, you then dismissed it as a typo here. Then after I complained to Arbcom, you reinserted your own reference, and left mine deleted here a few days later. --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk) 17:41, 30 May 2008 (UTC) The redundant references about her death were added to counter your claim that: "her death passed with relatively little notice". Obituaries in the New York Times, Washington Post, and Time magazine did not support your original research. (see section above)

Your dishonest complaint to the ArbCom had nothing to do with my change. Seeing a different spelling for a person's name in a single news source is not in itself notable; assuming that it's a simple typo is the only rational course. When I saw that the biographies of Bentley disagreed on the spelling, then it became noteworthy.
I've already responded several times over to your lack of understanding regarding the word "relatively". No original research was involved, as I have made clear.
And BTW, none of your comments here "respond" in any way to the points I make in the section above.
RedSpruce (talk) 18:16, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
I guess thats the difference between research and "assuming". You also say: "When I saw that the biographies of Bentley disagreed on the spelling, then it became noteworthy." (my emphasis added) Yes, a good example of solipsism. You have a tendency to delete my references in articles in favor of your own. I don't delete your's, more references are better than fewer, or none. --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk) 18:44, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
As you would have understood if you weren't focused on finding excuses to make a childish insult, my point in saying "when I saw that the biographies disagreed..." is that a biography, which is more carefully researched than a news source article, is a better and more significant source than a weekly or daily news outlet. The biographies, in this case, recount the history of Bentley's family, with some discussion of the origin of her middle name. Therefor the likelihood of a simple and meaningless typo is far less than it is with a news source.
And no, more references are not necessarily better than fewer. If that were true, then an article with 50 footnotes to every sentence would be "better" than a sane article, that someone might actually read. If I have a tendency to delete your references, it's because your references tend to be bad for various reasons, as these are, for the reasons I have stated. RedSpruce (talk) 18:58, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
I believe that argument is called reductio ad absurdum. --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk) 02:18, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
That is correct. Unfortunately for the point you're apparently trying to make, reductio ad absurdum is not an example of a false argument. It's a perfectly valid illustration that your statement was nonsensical. RedSpruce (talk) 05:04, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
And BTW, with the exception of your invalid argument "more references are better", you still haven't even tried to respond to any of the points I raised in the section above. Since you have no defense of those edits, you shouldn't be opposing their removal. RedSpruce (talk) 16:41, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
  • RfC response: Point #1: Neither Time magazine nor the Associate Press are go-to sources for the spelling of names. While they are generally accurate, they are not definitive, since, just like Wikipedia, their info is only as good as their sources. However, biographies by their nature investigate matters such as this (against primary sources, eg. birth certificates), so they are infinitely more appropriate sources for this kind of matter. In the end, ditch the Time and AP references. Point #2: Taking quotes from the source material is not standard practice, and because Wikipedia (and pretty much everybody) likes to use the fewest amount of words to express the most information, if referential notations don't introduce new material or clarify something confusing from the body, they are redundant, pointless, and bulky. RAN, haven't we discussed this before?--Esprit15d • talkcontribs 17:39, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
  • Point #1: We have a requirement and responsibility to use reliable and verifiable secondary sources to document facts in articles. Time and AP are exactly where we should be obtaining information, both to confirm and contradict information supplied in the article. Point #2: The use of quotations in references is a built-in feature of all of the citation templates, and a proposal to consider a prohibition of their use was roundly rejected by Arbcom. This is a perfect example of a case where including bare links (without quotations) leaves the sources meaningless and uses fewer words but provides no useful information. That others have arbitrarily decided not to take advantage of a designed system feature is no argument against its use. An edit summary stating "rv for the usual reasons, and 'advisor' is the more common spelling" is a clear demonstration of refusal to address the issues here in any meaningful fashion. Alansohn (talk) 02:24, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
"Point #1": You don't address my point that the spelling of this person's middle name is a trivial issue, not deserving of four sources. "a proposal to consider the prohibition [of footnote quotes]" was never made, and therefor was not "roundly rejected by Arbcom". Under the circumstances, "rv for the usual reasons" is precisely, utterly, crystal clear. RedSpruce (talk) 10:37, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
  • I think it is a bit of original research and speculation to say that the tertiary sources (the two books) trump the secondary sources (AP and Time), because the tertiary sources had access to death certificates. If the tertiary sources had access to the death certificate, why don't they match each other? We don't know that any more than what sources were used by Time and AP. All are unknowns. And even if someone orders the death certificate, that would just be another source, even if a primary one. --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk) 03:06, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
  • Honestly, though RAN, four sources? For a middle name? There are definitely bigger fish to fry here at Wikipedia, but since it was brought to RfC, I have to concede that this is a case of over citation.--Esprit15d • talkcontribs 21:10, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
  • Where there is a discrepancy, it is entirely appropriate to show that there are different versions in different sources. Showing the preponderance for one version requires multiple sources, and is the best way to demonstrate what we call "consensus" between the various sources. Are you suggesting that dishonesty is the reason for adding these sources? Alansohn (talk) 22:44, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
Since Esprit15d isn't as familiar with you two as some other editors are, I'm sure he was using "honestly" in its second (and very commonly known) definition: 2: used to emphasize the sincerity of an opinion, belief, or feeling: 'honestly, darling, I'm not upset'.
The only point to be documented here is that varying spellings of the middle name have been used by reliable sources. It is not necessary to show which spelling has a "preponderance", because it's a vanishingly trivial point that no reader will care about enough to justify the text required. Even if showing preponderance was important, that still wouldn't be an argument in favor of these footnotes, because they don't establish any preponderance.RedSpruce (talk) 18:20, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
Some sources "trump" others for obvious reasons. In this case the biographies trump the news sources, for the reasons I have stated and to which you have not responded. RedSpruce (talk) 10:37, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
Your original theory was that it was a typo, remember? That was another example of Original Research, that was incorrect. --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk) 15:10, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
And that comment is an example of a non-sequitur. RedSpruce (talk) 16:35, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
I think this prolonged discussion is enormous waste of time. Current version of this article makes excellent citations of the original sources; and it does not really matter if there are minor disagreements of the sources. I would like to see most articles in WP sourced like that. Let's keep the sources with citations.Biophys (talk) 02:22, 17 June 2008 (UTC)
The mistaken notion that "more references are better" has already been dealt with in the discussion above. Repetition and excessive coverage of trivial points do not make an article better. An article should not merely convey facts, but do so in a professional manner that is engaging and pleasant for the reader. RedSpruce (talk) 12:48, 17 June 2008 (UTC)
Then rewrite it in such a way that the repetition is avoided. I would do it myself, but really, an argument over the spelling of a middle name and what looks like different newspaper obituaries using different sources or just getting it wrong. And this rose to the level of a request for comment? Has anyone here heard of WP:LAME? (Before you get offended, have a quick read of the page - some are quite funny). Carcharoth (talk) 21:41, 19 June 2008 (UTC)
Rewriting to avoid repetition is precisely what I have done, Carcharoth, and precisely what RAN persists in undoing. I agree that taken as a single article, this issue is minor and lame. But RAN makes little detrimental edits like this on literally thousands of articles. If he can be convinced here--or somewhere--that what he's doing is a mistake, then all of Wikipedia will benefit. If this article becomes just another in the list of thousands where editors give up trying to reason with him, then he will continue to do his damage to thousands more articles. RedSpruce (talk) 22:04, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

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