GA review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Fashion of Catherine, Princess of Wales/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: MSincccc (talk · contribs) 07:19, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 01:08, 21 November 2025 (UTC)
I'll review this. I have a few things I'm reviewing at the moment so apologies if this takes time. 750h+ 01:08, 21 November 2025 (UTC)
- lead
- industry ever since ==> "industry since"
- public revelation of her relationship ==> "public announcement of her relationship" (more used word = more understandable to general audience)
- The so-called "Kate Middleton effect" describes "so-called" is redundant
- background
- students in residence at St Salvator's Hall ==> "students residing at St Salvator's Hall"
- “Students in residence at St Salvator’s Hall” is considered more idiomatic phrasing for a university hall of residence in British English.
- fashion and style
- pieces from Jigsaw where she comma would be preferable after "Jigsaw"
- In 2008 Elle noted Catherine a fashionable ==> "In 2008 Elle called Catherine a fashionable" (WP:PEACOCK)
- a fashionable tastemaker, and praised her comma unneeded
- contrasting to her friends' more ==> "contrasting with her friends' more"
- has been credited for popularising ==> "has been credited with popularising"
- noted to favor ==> "noted to favour" given this article is about a British person
- In June 2016, Catherine participated in a magazine shoot for Vogue's centenary issue and appeared on its cover.
- She has also worn pieces from environmentally conscious labels including Beulah London, Stella McCartney, Monica Vinader, and Gabriela Hearst. "including" is used in the previous sentence so maybe use "such as"
- influence and recognition
- desirability among 38 percent of American "per cent" is more common in British English
- images
- 2 images are appropriately licensed, with suitable WP:ALT text
- source review
- sources are generally reliable, many fashion and pop culture magazines noted
- brief spot check checks out
- @MSincccc: only really prose concerns above, happy to pass once all are addressed! 750h+ 11:37, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
- 750h+ Thanks for the comments. Responses above. MSincccc (talk) 14:52, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
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