Talk:Straight Outta Compton

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

More information Article milestones, Date ...
Former good articleStraight Outta Compton was one of the Music good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
November 14, 2007Good article nomineeListed
September 21, 2012Good article reassessmentDelisted
Current status: Delisted good article
Close

GA delist - article unclear, and not following sources closely enough

There is a good deal of information in the article - however, some of the language is not clear, or assumes prior knowledge of the album, its genre, and the impact it made. Sentences like: " N.W.A always enjoyed a particular reputation with U.S. Senators" assumes that the reader will know what that reputation is. The quote: "positioned Straight Outta Compton as the sound of the West Coast firing on New York's Fort Sumpter in what would become '90s culture's biggest Uncivil War" is similarly clear only to those who already know what is going on. There are few solid sources used in the article - the article depends largely on internet review sites, even though there are a number of books such as Rap Music and Street Consciousness by Cheryl L. Keyes, Icons of Hip Hop: An Encyclopedia of the Movement, Music, and Culture by Mickey Hess, Droppin Science by William Perkins, The Making of the American School Crisis by Emily E. Straus, as well as Dr. Dre: A Biography, and other books.

The lead has statements that are not fully supported by sources, and which are not followed up in the main body. The lead does not follow the guidance in WP:Lead. And there are further challengeable statements and quotes that are not supported by citations. The prose is not always as concise and clear as it could be: "Critics of the album expressed their view that the record glamorized Black-on-Black crime" could be written as: "Critics felt that the album glamorized Black-on-Black crime". (Is it usually written as "Black-on-Black crime"?).

The article doesn't meet GA criteria at the moment. It's possible that the article has slipped over the years, or just that GA standards have tightened. I think the article needs to be improved to keep the GA listing. SilkTork ✔Tea time 08:53, 2 September 2012 (UTC)

Reassessing. SilkTork ✔Tea time 17:13, 2 September 2012 (UTC)

GA Reassessment

This discussion is transcluded from Talk:Straight Outta Compton/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Comments on GA criteria

Pass
  • Image of cover is appropriately tagged. It doesn't need a caption. SilkTork ✔Tea time 17:45, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Stable. There's been some inappropriate IP edits, but not enough to make the article unstable. SilkTork ✔Tea time 17:47, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Ref section. There is an appropriate reference section. SilkTork ✔Tea time 17:49, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
Query
  • No original research and bias. Because some statements are not appropriately sourced it is unknown if these statements are original research or are biased. Once the article is securely sourced this query is likely to disappear. SilkTork ✔Tea time 17:58, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Major aspects. Though there is material on Critical response, and there are assertions of the album's importance in the lead, I don't feel the article has adequately or appropriately explained to the general reader, supported by reliable sources, the importance or relevance of the album. I have put it here as a query, though I feel this aspect is quite probably a fail. SilkTork ✔Tea time 18:03, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Focus. There is a lot of material on samples. The material does not explain the samples, merely lists them. This gives a feel of trivia or that the material has a low relevance. The material should either be removed or its relevance/importance explained to the general reader. SilkTork ✔Tea time 18:11, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
Fail
  • Valid fair use rationales. There are three media files, though one song, "Straight Outta Compton", is not discussed at all, and the other two are not discussed in relation to the media file - "Fuck tha Police" is mentioned as being responsible for NWA's fame, and that it doesn't appear on the "Clean" album - but the music is not discussed, which is the point of the media file. The lyrics can be discussed without use of a media file, though the delivery of the lyrics, if appropriate, would benefit from a media file. SilkTork ✔Tea time 17:27, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Prose. Prose is not "clear and concise". Needs a copyedit. SilkTork ✔Tea time 17:50, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Mos: Lead. To meet GA criteria 1(b), which relates to specific manual of style guidelines, the article needs to comply with the advice in WP:LEAD. That is, in addition to being an introduction, the lead needs to be an adequate overview of the whole of the article. As a rough guide, each major section in the article should be represented with an appropriate summary in the lead. Also, the article should provide further details on all the things mentioned in the lead. And, the first few sentences should mention the most notable features of the article's subject - the essential facts that every reader should know. In addition, the lead should not contain important statements which are not also in the main body. SilkTork ✔Tea time 17:52, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Citation to reliable sources. A number of statements need sourcing or better sourcing. SilkTork ✔Tea time 17:59, 2 September 2012 (UTC)

General comments


On hold

  • Significant contributors and WikiProjects will be informed. GAR on hold for seven days to allow issues listed above to be addressed. SilkTork ✔Tea time 18:12, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
Agree that is should be demoted. My only contributions were mostly to the reviews part, so I couldnt really address these issues as I have little grasp on the topic. Dan56 (talk) 18:53, 2 September 2012 (UTC)

Delist

  • There's been no response, so I am delisting. SilkTork ✔Tea time 20:24, 21 September 2012 (UTC)

Release date

Requested move 27 January 2016

Requested move 22 March 2018

Single ??

Possible correct release date

Requested move 1 April 2021

Fan POV

Release date

Related Articles

Wikiwand AI