Talk:Oriana Skylar Mastro
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 3, 2024. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Oriana Skylar Mastro (pictured), a Stanford political scientist, joined the U.S. Air Force as a PhD student to better understand military issues in the Asia Pacific? | |||||||||||||
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Removing 'notability guideline for academics' tag
An earlier editor added a tag suggesting that the article may not meet WP:ACADEMIC. I believe the sources cited currently do demonstrate the subject's notability, and thus the tag should be removed. W9793 (talk) 01:11, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by AirshipJungleman29 talk 13:16, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
- ... that China scholar Oriana Skylar Mastro enlisted in the US military in 2004 following advice from deputy commander of then U.S. Pacific Command, despite having planned to pursue an academic career? Source: https://news.stanford.edu/2021/11/11/combining-military-service-scholarship/
- Reviewed:
5x expanded by W9793 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:05, 6 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Oriana Skylar Mastro; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- FYI An image has been added to the infobox, so this can be turned into an image hook. Bremps... 22:33, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
- 'Thanks! I've made the update. User:W9793
- A QPQ is required, as W9793 has nominated more than five articles. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 02:27, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
GA Review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Oriana Skylar Mastro/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: W9793 (talk · contribs) 19:05, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 12:51, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I will complete a review within one week. -Riley1012 (talk) 12:51, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Good Article review progress box
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1. Well-written
- Per MOS:LEAD, information that is cited in the body of the article doesn't need a citation in the lead
- Add her current roles at Stanford and AEI (mentioned in the lead) to the body
- Add wikilink in the lead to Academic tenure
- Mastro holds a BA (2006) in East Asian Studies from Stanford University and a MA (2009) and PhD (2013) in politics from Princeton University. Spell out these acronyms and add wikilinks.
- In 2008, while a doctoral student at Princeton, Mastro met with then deputy commander of the then U.S. Pacific Command (now U.S. Indo-Pacific Command, USINDOPACOM) Lt. Gen. Dan P. Leaf at a conference where she was invited to present research she and her colleagues at Carnegie's China program conducted earlier about the "military balance of power across the Taiwan Strait." This is a lengthy sentence, consider breaking it up.
- Leaf suggested that she enlist into the U.S. military... change to "enlist in the U.S. military"
- ...Mastro enlisted in the U.S. Air Force in fall 2008... change to "in the fall of 2008"
2. Verifiable
- Ref. 3 and 5 should not be used per WP:SELFPUB
- Per Copyvio check, reword the following phrases: continues to serve in the US Air Force Reserve as a strategic planner at the US Indo-Pacific Command. and Mastro's research focuses on the Chinese military, Asia-Pacific security, war termination, and coercive diplomacy. (which also seems to be copied from the self-published source)
- From 2006 to 2007, Mastro was selected as a junior fellow for the Carnegie Endowment for International Peace's China program. In 2008, she was part of the summer associate program at the RAND Corporation. Source?
- In 2013, Mastro was appointed assistant professor of security studies at Georgetown's Edmund A. Walsh School of Foreign Service, and in 2020, she was appointed a center fellow at Stanford's Freeman Spogli Institute for International Studies. Source?
- I've spot checked all the sources that weren't links to her publications:
- Source 2 does not mention her non-resident senior fellow status (you could use one of her articles for AEI [ex] instead since her role is listed in the sidebar on those)
- Also, did ref. 2 use to include a biography (if so, add an archived version)? I'm not seeing any of the information attributed to this source.
- Ref. 7 is a dead link, add an archived link
3. Broad
- Is there any more information you could add to the education section? Any information about her life before academia (hometown, etc.)?
- ex: source 4 mentions she studied Mandarin during her undergrad at Stanford, I would add that.
- It would be nice to have a DOB or even a birth year, if you could find it.
4. Neutral
The article is neutral.
5. Stable
The article is stable, and there are no ongoing disputes.
6. Illustrated
The one photo is in the public domain and has a relevant caption.
@W9793: There's a lot of information here that cannot be verified with the provided sources. Please add more citations, and I'll take another look. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:58, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Riley1012 - Thanks for reviewing. I will attempt to address the issues raised within the next few days. W9793 (talk) 02:32, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Riley1012 - I've fixed most issues and tried to follow your suggestions for improving prose - Please let me know if you think any further revision is needed. Thanks. W9793 (talk) 02:47, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
Oriana Skylar Mastro
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- Result: Delisted. TompaDompa (talk) 05:53, 22 January 2026 (UTC)
Really short, large portions of unsourced/poorly sourced content, and article leaves much to be desired. Sources are largely primary(source 1 is an interview, 13 is a product page for a book, etc) and this page really doesn't show that she's notable. monkeysmashingkeyboards (talk) 23:20, 6 January 2026 (UTC)
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- comment that the sources that were removed after these edits are also all written by her monkeysmashingkeyboards (talk) 23:49, 6 January 2026 (UTC)
- Speedy delist, article is so substantially below GA standards for length, tone, scope, and sourcing that I'm amazed it even came remotely close to passing. The bullet list of her works is longer than the rest of the article! It doesn't say anything about her before her professional career, and there's only one line about her personal life at all. As shown above by Monkeysmashingkeyboards, none of the sources in the article are wholly independent of her, several of them are 404, and only a couple are even reliable. Had I seen this at GAN, I would have quick-failed it on length alone.
- @Lee Vilenski:, @Chipmunkdavis:, @Trainsandotherthings: do any of you support the motion to speedy-delist this? Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 16:02, 12 January 2026 (UTC)
- I don't think we should really be speedy delisting GAs outside of blatent copyvios and housekeeping. However, if the person isn't notable, AfD is the solution. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:07, 12 January 2026 (UTC)
- I'm cautious about speedy delisting for length, as the community has never found a firm consensus that would help guide that. I agree with Lee that if sourcing is an issue, AfD is the correct forum. I also encouraging tagging the article appropriately for sourcing concerns given the source assessment analysis. CMD (talk) 16:35, 12 January 2026 (UTC)
- I added a handful of maintenance tags. Monkeysmashingkeyboards already proved the lack of secondary sourcing, so I added a {{primary sources}}. Also, I added {{missing}} and {{expand section}} to appropriate sections. If the article's short length alone may not be enough for a speedy delist, then I think the other maintenance issues are. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 17:48, 12 January 2026 (UTC)
- While I agree the issues are egregious, speedy delist is usually only for cut-and-dry cases, as @Lee Vilenski says: copyvios/housekeeping, and other uncontestable issues - perhaps attack pages, if one ever makes it through GAN. This delist is possibly maybe perhaps??? contestable, so I'd suggest just leave it be.
- Pinging author and reviewer: @W9793, @Riley1012 monkeysmashingkeyboards (talk) 21:26, 12 January 2026 (UTC)
- I agree with Lee Vilenski and CMD that we don't need to speedy delist this article. That doesn't mean the issues aren't serious, but those should be addressed through normal editing. If substantial improvements aren't forthcoming, this will close as a delist, of course, but I don't see a reason not to let the reassessment play out. I'm not sure why this was initially passed with sourcing in this state though. I wouldn't pass any article at GAN without secondary sourcing, and it's made significantly worse that we're talking about a BLP without secondary sourcing. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 22:55, 12 January 2026 (UTC)
- @Trainsandotherthings: The FAR process has the WP:ROT13 rule, stating that FAs can be speedily delisted if they're deemed to be extremely below the standards. I've considered whether WP:ROT13 should also extend to GARs, but I can also see the argument that GAR is less formalized and therefore less needing of a "speedy delist" equivalent. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 17:57, 13 January 2026 (UTC)
- Unlike at FAC and FAR, the coordinators here aren't god-kings but normal community members who have volunteered to be points of contact when there are questions or disputes in the GAR process. We are a lot less formalized, which makes sense given the lower stakes between GA and FA status. This already has attention of the GAR process, so it will be delisted if not improved sufficiently to meet the criteria. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 01:05, 14 January 2026 (UTC)
- If I'm reading this correctly, tl;dr is "we don't have a formalized speedy delete because we really don't have an urgent need for it" monkeysmashingkeyboards (talk) 03:47, 14 January 2026 (UTC)
- Unlike at FAC and FAR, the coordinators here aren't god-kings but normal community members who have volunteered to be points of contact when there are questions or disputes in the GAR process. We are a lot less formalized, which makes sense given the lower stakes between GA and FA status. This already has attention of the GAR process, so it will be delisted if not improved sufficiently to meet the criteria. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 01:05, 14 January 2026 (UTC)
- I agree that this is poorly sourced, notability is not shown, and even if the article were to be kept, it isn't even close to GA standards. The military history project banner shell is incomplete, which may be the reason or a large contributing factor as to why it was never assessed by the military history project bot or a human assessor. I would favor deletion on the basis of non-notability but it should go through the proper deletion process to accomplish this. I am a military history project coordinator and have assessed many military history articles. Given the deficiencies that have already been pointed out, if the article were kept, I would rate it as Start class for the project. I also agree that as a matter of propriety, this GAN should probably run the proper course of time even though I doubt it will be upgraded. It may eventually be deleted. I am not familiar with any guideline with allows the GA rating to be removed without running the full course of time with time given for any editor who can improve the article to come forward to do it. Donner60 (talk) 05:50, 16 January 2026 (UTC)
- @Trainsandotherthings: The FAR process has the WP:ROT13 rule, stating that FAs can be speedily delisted if they're deemed to be extremely below the standards. I've considered whether WP:ROT13 should also extend to GARs, but I can also see the argument that GAR is less formalized and therefore less needing of a "speedy delist" equivalent. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 17:57, 13 January 2026 (UTC)






