- "Anonymous 1996" is not a proper citation. The article's two headings, "Background" and "Influence", suggest that it has nothing about the Vita itself. A statement about the Vita's historical value—
The Vita is the only source for the civil war between Dagobert II (676–79) and Theuderic III (675–91) —has been removed. A redlink to the Vita Anstrudis was also removed. Srnec (talk) 02:13, 9 May 2026 (UTC)
- I formatted it that way because it was from the Vita's translation in the McNamara book, which is in the second section of the chapter about Sadalberga (pp. 178–194). As this article states, the Vita was written by an anonymous author. What would be a better choice?
- I don't understand your problem with the headings. The first is its historical context, including a brief summary of its plot. The second is a discussion of its impact and influence, including what scholars have said about it. Can you suggest better heading titles?
- I returned the missing statement and the red link, as per your request. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 04:37, 9 May 2026 (UTC)
- Nothing in the citation indicates that you are citing a translation of the Vita itself:
Anonymous (1996). "Saint Sadalberga". In McNamara, Jo Ann; Halborg, John E.; Whatley, E. Gordon (eds.). Sainted Women of the Dark Ages. Translated by McNamara, Jo Ann. Duke University Press. pp. 178–194. ISBN 0-8223-1200-X. I would use the format <ref>''Vita'', ch. __, translated in {{harvnb|McNamara|Halborg|Whatley|1996|p=__}}.</ref> for footnotes—but that's not the only option. It just needs to be clear what it is. The title of Anonymous 1996 is given as "Saint Sadalberga", which does not indicate the Vita.
- Okay. The Vita is short, only a few pages, so there's only one chapter. Should I fill in "1" in the blank space? But thanks for the assistance and guidance, and for teaching me about how to format historical sources. (This means that I'll have to reformat the same source in Sadalberga, which is easy enough.)
- We go from background to influence without discussing content. I'm not necessarily saying the article is deficient, but its structure may leave readers confused. What if I don't care about background and influence and just want to know what's in it? Srnec (talk) 17:04, 9 May 2026 (UTC)
- The content includes the plot summary, in the first paragraph. I could either separate the two paragraphs in current "Background" section, even though I personally don't like single-paragraph sections. Or I could rename it to "Plot summary and background." I could also rename the "Influence" to "Historical impact and influence". I will follow your suggestions. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 18:14, 9 May 2026 (UTC)
- Looking at it more closely, I'd say the Background section really isn't. It is more synopsis and dating. Likewise, the Influence section is probably more Analysis. When I write articles on pre-modern literary works, I think in terms of composition (authorship, dating, place of composition), synopsis (what it says), transmission (manuscripts, editions, translations) and reception (how is has been used and read). The organization of the article often follows the same path. But every case is a little different. This is a suggestion. Srnec (talk) 01:01, 10 May 2026 (UTC)
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