Talk:Siege of Ariminum (538)
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Pronoun ambiguity
"sent infantry to replace John and his cavalry forces, dispatching them along the Via Flaminia with a thousand horsemen to arrive in Ariminum before the retreating Goths arrived"
To what does the them refer to? LeChatiliers Pupper (talk) 04:43, 25 November 2025 (UTC)
- Also to whom does his refer to here?
- Meanwhile, Belisarius and Narses came through the Apennines, passing Urbisaglia. On his march, he encountered a force of Goths, who were defeated. LeChatiliers Pupper (talk) 04:51, 25 November 2025 (UTC)
- First, thank you for the constructive edits.
- dispatching them... should correspond to "infantry forces", but somehow the "forces" went missing
- his --> Belisarius. I changed to Byzantine forces to avoid repetition of his name A.Cython (talk) 05:07, 25 November 2025 (UTC)
- NP happy to read about the wars of Justinian. LeChatiliers Pupper (talk) 05:26, 25 November 2025 (UTC)
- First, thank you for the constructive edits.
Nominator: A.Cython (talk · contribs) 23:28, 14 December 2025 (UTC)
GA review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Siege of Ariminum (538)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Ajay Platinum (talk · contribs) 14:34, 9 January 2026 (UTC)
Hello! I'll be reviewing this article. Feel free to push back against anything you want to discuss further. If it isn't a quick pass, we'll work together to get this article up to GA level. Any changes too minor to bother you with, I'll just do directly in the article - but feel free to discuss those as well. Ajay Platinum (talk) 14:34, 9 January 2026 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing the article and providing constructive comments. I will try to address all the issues raised.A.Cython(talk) 03:41, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
Review
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
- PASS
EDITS REQUIRED. The article structure meets the MoS criteria, the prose flows naturally, and the lead is very well written. I will be making some minor edits to the language, some of which I am explicitly mentioning for your reference: (1) I recommend using John's full name (John the Sanguinary) at first mention and then switching to the mononym as this is standard practice in academic writing, (2) Wiki-linking Rome to Roman Empire, etc. - Some comments for you: (1) The infobox vaguely mentions the strength (smaller and larger forces); please see if you can find quantifiable information (number of soldiers/platoons on both sides). (2) Please add a small section before "Capture of Arinimum" that briefly outlines the Siege of Rome (537–538) as it is heavily mentioned in the article.
- Thank you for the comments and changes.
- (1) I removed the causalities as I am not aware any numbers about them. I added some numbers/estimations for the army sizes, though these are estimations based on numbers provided for the Siege of Rome. I tried to be as faithful to the sources without doing WP:OR.
- (2) Added a subsection as requested.A.Cython(talk) 03:41, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- Noted on the number of casualties/force strength. Thanks for adding the subsection - the article read very naturally now. Changing criterion to PASS. Ajay Platinum (talk) 04:58, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
- a (reference section):
b (inline citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism): 
- PASS. This article is sufficiently cited and uses appropriate sources. I spot-checked both primary references (Procopius, 1919 & 1924) and a secondary reference (Hugher, 2009). All seems to be in order and I verified that the citations are valid and correctly placed.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused): 
- PASS
MINOR EDITS REQUIRED. The article breadth is satisfactory. I recommend including a section on the Siege of Rome. Once that is reviewed, this criteria will also pass.- I have added a subsection that briefly describes the Siege of Rome. A.Cython(talk) 03:41, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- Thanks. Criterion changed to PASS. Ajay Platinum (talk) 05:00, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- I have added a subsection that briefly describes the Siege of Rome. A.Cython(talk) 03:41, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:

- PASS
CLARIFICATION REQUIRED. I find a slight imbalance in the manner in which the siege is presented, i.e., focusing more on the exploits of the Byzantine forces. Are there no Gothic sources on this siege and the importance of Ariminum? Were there are any Gothic generals to support Vitiges?- The sole primary source that survives is that of Procopius as far as I know. There is another Roman historian Cassiodorus, who worked under the Gothic court, but much of his work has not survived; his lost work on Gothic History was completed before the Justinian's Wars so it covers the previous Gothic-Roman wars from the Gothic perspective. As such all secondary sources that I have access rely on Procopius to tell the story. Note that modern authors often attempt to correct Procopius claims based on modern estimations or other evidence. Whenever possible I include these comments in the articles.
I do not recall (and from a quick search) if other Gothic commanders are mentioned. A.Cython(talk) 03:41, 10 January 2026 (UTC)- Good decision to add the clarifying notes. I too was unable to find other sources from the Gothic side. Well, the article looks more balanced now, so let's leave it as is. Ajay Platinum (talk) 05:07, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- The sole primary source that survives is that of Procopius as far as I know. There is another Roman historian Cassiodorus, who worked under the Gothic court, but much of his work has not survived; his lost work on Gothic History was completed before the Justinian's Wars so it covers the previous Gothic-Roman wars from the Gothic perspective. As such all secondary sources that I have access rely on Procopius to tell the story. Note that modern authors often attempt to correct Procopius claims based on modern estimations or other evidence. Whenever possible I include these comments in the articles.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:

- PASS. The article appears stable from its recent edit history.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
- PASS
EDIT REQUIRED. The article has a good collection of images. I have a comment on this image that you created: please add geographic or demongraphic labels (such as nearby cities, the sea that appears in the top-right corner, a compass/direction of North, etc.). This will make the image easier to comprehend.- It is a schematic to illustrate the battle plan/deception of Belisarius. It is inspired by a similar figure (in black and white colors) found Syvänne's book (2021) p. 161 (clarification the figure was made from scratch). I cannot do much beyond this as it would be construed WP:OR since we do not know with precision the army movements with respect to geographical locations. However, I have added a compass/direction and changed the figure caption to make clear that this is not a battle map. A.Cython(talk) 03:41, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- Noted. The compass adds a fine touch to the image. Ajay Platinum (talk) 05:04, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- It is a schematic to illustrate the battle plan/deception of Belisarius. It is inspired by a similar figure (in black and white colors) found Syvänne's book (2021) p. 161 (clarification the figure was made from scratch). I cannot do much beyond this as it would be construed WP:OR since we do not know with precision the army movements with respect to geographical locations. However, I have added a compass/direction and changed the figure caption to make clear that this is not a battle map. A.Cython(talk) 03:41, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- The article is very close to passing the GA criteria. Once you have made the required edits, it should be an easy pass. Overall, very well written!
- Ajay Platinum (talk) 15:52, 9 January 2026 (UTC)
- An additional comment: The article has very few dates other than those in the Infobox and the date the siege was lifted. Please try to add dates for when John captured Ariminum, when the Gothic siege of Ariminum commenced, and for other critical events. Ajay Platinum (talk) 15:56, 9 January 2026 (UTC)
- @Ajay Platinum I added dates wherever possible and addressed your comments. Please let me know if there is anything else that needs to be tackled. Thank you for your review. A.Cython(talk) 03:41, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- @A.Cython Thanks for making all the revisions in a timely fashion. I am now upgrading this article to GA status. Please give the bot a moment to sort things out behind-the-scenes. Congratulations on a well-written and interesting article! Ajay Platinum (talk) 05:11, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. You can locate your hook here. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Zzz plant (talk) 23:43, 12 February 2026 (UTC)
- ... that the way Belisarius broke the Siege of Ariminum (538) is considered a prime example of Sun Tzu's principle of "Subjugating the enemy without fighting is the true pinnacle of excellence"?
- Source: Ilkka Syvänne, Military History of Late Rome 518–565 (2021) p. 379 (note 53) A category of its own are the victories without a battle, which were achieved through manoeuvering and stratagems. The following two examples show how Belisarius in particular was able to achieve successes through the use of his intellect. There were also other means like the use of diplomacy that were used to achieve positive results. However, the following examples show how the military could be used without a fight. Sun Tzu 3.2 (c.500 B.C): “Subjugating the enemy without fighting is the true pinnacle of excellence”
Also p.166 This stands as an excellent example of the tactics adopted when one did not want to engage the enemy in combat, which used all of the branches of service (navy, infantry, cavalry) and employed a skilled use of successive psychological shocks to produce the flight of the enemy.53 Furthermore, to succeed, this manoeuvre demanded excellent cooperation between the different sections of the army and therefore shows the remarkable ability of the troops and commanders at this time.
ALT1: ... that the Byzantine commander Belisarius broke the Ostrogoths' Siege of Ariminum (538) by projecting larger force?Source: Ilkka Syvänne, Military History of Late Rome 518–565 (2021) p.166 This stands as an excellent example of the tactics adopted when one did not want to engage the enemy in combat, which used all of the branches of service (navy, infantry,cavalry) and employed a skilled use of successive psychological shocks to produce the flight of the enemy.ALT2: ... that the Ostrogoths' Siege of Ariminum (538) was broken by the Byzantine commander Belisarius through successive psychological tactics that caused the Ostrogoths to flee?Source: Same as the aboveALT3: ... that Belisarius marched against numerically superior Ostrogoth forces at the Siege of Ariminum (538) to save one his commanders, who had disobeyed his orders and refused thank him in the end?Source: Ian Hughes, Belisarius, The Last Roman General (2009) p. 165 Upon the relief of the town, the first person to the city was Ildiger, and when Belisarius implied that John owed a debt to Belisarius’ son-in-law, John replied that his gratitude was to Narses the eunuch, suggesting that Belisarius had only come to his aid after being persuaded to act.
John’s response deserves examination. Although the statement has been interpreted by Procopius as an insult to Belisarius, there may have been more to the reply. In the early Roman Empire, citizens of Rome were bound to one another by the client/patron system. No doubt by the time of Justinian the system had changed, and probably drastically, but the idea of owing a personal debt still remained. It is possible that John was not being insulting as such, but was attempting to avoid an obligation to someone with whom he was at odds politically.- Reviewed:
- Comment: This is my forth DYK nomination.
A.Cython(talk) 06:28, 10 January 2026 (UTC).
- @A.Cython:First thing's first, article is in good shape, without evidence of copyvio. Eligible via recent GA promotion. Long enough and neutral. I like the initial quote, but I don't think it's right to reference Sun Tzu when its just one person who made the comparison. ALT3 is interesting but a bit overly-technical to non-specialists and long (it's also not standard to say the parenthetical in the hook. Maybe something like "... that Belisarius broke the Siege of Ariminum to save a general who had refused his orders?" Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 07:22, 16 January 2026 (UTC)
- @Generalissima:Thank you for your comments. Here are some alternatives based on your input:
- ALT4 "... that the way Belisarius broke the Siege of Ariminum (538) is praised by historians for defeating the Ostrogoths without battle?"
- In addition to Ilkka Syvänne source, here is a second source Ian Hughes 2009 Belisarius The last Roman General p. 165 The whole strategy displays Belisarius’ abilities as a commander. He was able to foresee the enemy’s response and so make maximum use of the forces available. It was an excellent piece of generalship and won the day without a single casualty.
- Another source J. B. Bury 1958 History of the Later Roman Empire: From the Death of Theodosius I to the Death of Justinian vol. 2 p. 198 It required military skill but when Belisarius set his mind to the problem he solved it triumphantly. In order to the mitigate the danger from Auximum, ...
- [edit] One more source Antony Brogna (2015) The Generalship of Belisarius epub pp. 57, 64 Belisarius’ plan to save Rimini was a masterstroke of deception and psychological warfare. Having inferior numbers compared to the Goths at Rimini, ... Through maneuver, deception, and psychological operations alone, and without a single causality, Belisarius had scored a victory against a superior force. ... Knowing their fears, his complex maneuvering, a product of his imagination, led to moving the superior Goth force away from Rimini. What follows below will highlight numerous other examples of his keen intellect.
- ALT5 " ... that Belisarius broke the Siege of Ariminum to save a general who had refused his orders?"
- Sources see above.
- ALT6 " ... that Belisarius in the Siege of Ariminum saved his besieged general who refused to thank him later?"
- Sources see above.
- Let me know if the above are an improvement. A.Cython(talk) 14:07, 16 January 2026 (UTC)
- Added one more in attempt to combine ALT5 & ALT6
- ALT7 " ... that Belisarius in the Siege of Ariminum saved his insubordinate general who in the end refused to thank him?" A.Cython(talk) 23:23, 16 January 2026 (UTC)
- Courtesy call to @Generalissima in case you have forgotten. I still feel the ALT0 is the better of all the others (the other three historians provided in ALT4 effectively say the same thing) as it provides interesting connection between Belisarius and Sun Tzu. I may be mistaken, but based on my limited experience with DYK, a hook only needs to mentioned in the article and be supported by a reliable source; it does not require academic consensus, especially on a non-contentious topic. If an academic consensus were required, many DYK hooks would never have appeared on the Wikipedia front page. I only spoke my thoughts aloud, because I will be reviewing DYK soon and I need to have a better grasp of what makes a hook great. That said, I would appreciate hearing your thoughts on the alternative hooks. Thank you in advance for your time and willingness to review the current DYK nomination. A.Cython(talk) 22:10, 21 January 2026 (UTC)
- @Generalissima:Thank you for your comments. Here are some alternatives based on your input:
@A.Cython: Ach, my bad. I had been traveling all last week and haven't had time to respond. I like both ALT5 and ALT6. they're cited in-article and check out in the sources. I feel it's important to have a "punchy" hook to capture readers who might not be familiar with military history or the Byzantines. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 01:42, 26 January 2026 (UTC)
- @A.Cython:First thing's first, article is in good shape, without evidence of copyvio. Eligible via recent GA promotion. Long enough and neutral. I like the initial quote, but I don't think it's right to reference Sun Tzu when its just one person who made the comparison. ALT3 is interesting but a bit overly-technical to non-specialists and long (it's also not standard to say the parenthetical in the hook. Maybe something like "... that Belisarius broke the Siege of Ariminum to save a general who had refused his orders?" Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 07:22, 16 January 2026 (UTC)








