Talk:Roblox oof
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Roblox oof is currently a Video games good article nominee. Nominated by Veyhola (talk) at 01:43, 14 May 2026 (UTC) This article is ready to be reviewed in accordance with the good article criteria. Any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article may review the article and decide if it should be listed as a good article. To start the review process, click start review and then save the page. See the instructions. |
| Roblox oof was nominated as a Video games good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (April 19, 2026, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
| This article was nominated for deletion on 1 April 2026. The result of the discussion was Withdrawn. |
Original research and notability
I feel like this section "Origin" may contain some texts as original research.
For example: I tried finding pre-2013 client metadata, 1999 sound date creation, Joey Kuras, and audio editing software called Sound Forge 4.5, in sources, (such as BBC), however, I couldn’t find mentions in reliable sources.
With that being said, you can sort this out, but if you can't find some or any mentions in reliable sources, remove it. Thanks. Artemhao (talk) 15:38, 29 March 2026 (UTC)
- The text may be copied from Fandom wikis without Creative Commons attribution, that may be considered copyright infringement. See this comparison from Wikipedia and Fandom.
- It says the same in "Origin" section and may be some of text copied outside "Origin". Also, I removed "It also plays as a sound test when the player changes the volume bar in the settings tab.", mainly due to no reliable sources, the "volume bar" type text also says the same in Fandom. Artemhao (talk) 09:17, 30 March 2026 (UTC)
- Solved. Artemhao (talk) 10:04, 8 April 2026 (UTC)
GA review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Roblox oof/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: SilviaASH (talk · contribs) 04:06, 6 April 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 06:06, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
Shall review. Arconning (talk) 06:06, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
- @SilviaASH I believe here shall be my comments! Arconning (talk) 14:08, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback. I'll be going out of town for a few days soon but I should be able to address these later next week. silviaASH (inquire within) 19:49, 11 April 2026 (UTC)
- Thanks again for the comments. Unfortunately since coming back home I've gotten pretty sick and I don't think I'll have the time or energy to bring this up to snuff for GA in the immediate term. I may renominate this in the future after more thoroughly addressing the issues raised here. silviaASH (inquire within) 19:09, 19 April 2026 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback. I'll be going out of town for a few days soon but I should be able to address these later next week. silviaASH (inquire within) 19:49, 11 April 2026 (UTC)
Prose and MoS
- All mentions of "oof" needs to have quotation marks and are in lowercase as opposed to capitalized (Oof).
Lead and infobox
- "The sound became an Internet meme due to its humorous nature.", source?
- "as designing the game's sounds with Tallarico", "with designing the game's sounds with Tallarico"
- "Roblox removed from the platform as a free sound on July 2022,", removed the audio I'm assuming. Please fix.
- "a free sound on July 2022", "a free sound in July 2022"
- " video posted on their social media accounts", the body only mentions Twitter.
Origin
- "The original sound was first used in 2000 computer game Messiah", "The original sound was first used in the 2000 computer game Messiah"
- "Hbomberguy", add context on who he is. + seeing the rest of the article, you could say "In a video essay made by British YouTuber and video essayist Harry Brewis, also known as Hbomberguy, he states that he found in his own investigation..."
History
- Is there any history based on the sound's implementation before the controversy? (e.g. first use of oof as the default sound)
- Wikilinks of "Messiah", "Tommy Tallarico", "video essay", and "Hbomberguy" don't have to be wikilinked here as it's already been wikilinked previously within the body.
- "American video game composer Tommy Tallarico.", this can just be Tallarico.
- Add context on what Robux is.
- "In November 2022, British YouTuber and video essayist Harry Brewis, also known as Hbomberguy, published "ROBLOX_OOF.mp3", a video essay", "In November 2022, Hbomberguy published "ROBLOX_OOF.mp3", a video essay..."
- "at the heart of", this is a bit idiomatic.
- "the Roblox legal dispute.", wikilink Roblox's first mention rather than this.
- ("Oof" sound return) as opposed to the italicized version to maintain consistency within the article.
- "Twitter/X", "on Twitter, now known as X,..."
Images and recording
- All media used within the article are under proper licensing, are relevant, and have proper captioning. All good here.
References
- Earwig seems to check out okay.
- Reference checks: 4, 8, 9, 10. All good.
Miscellaneous
- No ongoing edit war, broad enough information, neutral.
