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Semi-protected edit request on 23 May 2020
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Catalonia cannot be a national team by definition. This information is wrong and false. Luiceur (talk) 19:15, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the {{edit semi-protected}}template. See Catalonia_national_football_team. If you think it does not exist, please start a discussion there. RudolfRed (talk) 19:32, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 7 June 2020
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Catalonia is not a country recognized by FIFA. The section where he played for Catalonia should be removed under national teams Afj82 (talk) 03:27, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
Not done I'm not sure what your point is. The article on the Catalonia national football team makes it clear that they are not "not affiliated with either FIFA or UEFA and is therefore not allowed to participate in either the FIFA World Cup or the UEFA European Championship". So- If you're trying to state that only FIFA-recognized national teams should be in player infoboxes, then make the statement (but you'll have to get consensus from the football project by discussing it at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Football first).
- If you're trying to state that it should not be discussed in the "international career" section, the claim is sourced so I don't see it going anywhere. There's already nothing in the "career statistics" section, so you can't mean that. Please explain yourself more clearly. Walter Görlitz (talk) 04:18, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 7 August 2020
Champions league Season 17-18
Semi-protected edit request on 18 March 2021
Semi-protected edit request on 11 May 2021
Tito and Pep
Barca
Reviewer: Dr Salvus (talk · contribs) 20:21, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Pep Guardiola/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Hello. I'll be the one who'll review this. Not being a native English speaker, it could take a few days to review the grammar (I'm going to do this with a friend). Dr Salvus 20:21, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
Review
- Well-written:
- Verifiable with no original research:
- Broad in its coverage:
- Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
- Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
- Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
Result
Discussion
Tomorrow, I'll see the rest. Dr Salvus 21:07, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
Let's see the grammatical mistakes (corrected by my friend)
- He is often considered to be one of the greatest managers of all time -> He is considered one of the greatest managers of all time [...]
- he guided Barcelona to the treble of La Liga, Copa del Rey and UEFA Champions League. -> he led Barcelona to the treble of La Liga, Copa del Rey and UEFA Champions League.
- in 2003, Guardiola chose to play in Qatar with Al-Ahli from Doha in the Qatar Stars League, -> in 2003, Guardiola decided to play in Qatar with Al-Ahli from Doha in the Qatar Stars League,
- a home draw to Southampton on 23 October 2016 meant Guardiola had equalled -> a home draw to Southampton on 23 October 2016 meant Guardiola had equaled
Dr Salvus 22:39, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
- Infobox looks to meet all manuals of style except, MOS:DATETOPRES. Walter Görlitz (talk) 17:34, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Dr Salvus Is there anything else you or Walter think there is to fix? ArsenalGhanaPartey (talk) 14:54, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
Further comments
- The prestigious Italian magazine Guerin Sportivo heralded: remove prestigious, it's not at all.
- Merge the last three sections of his playing career in a section called "Late career".
I've read the first half of the text. Will do the rest later. Dr Salvus 18:02, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Dr Salvus Done. ArsenalGhanaPartey (talk) 16:19, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
- I must still see the last two sections, which I'll see tomorrow Dr Salvus 18:50, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
- @ArsenalGhanaPartey I've finished everything.
- which has influenced approaches of managers such as Mauricio Pochettino,[citation needed] add the source or leave it out
- On 6 January 2022, Guardiola tested positive for COVID-19. By 14 January 2022, Guardiola had recovered from COVID-19. -> On 6 January 2022, Guardiola tested positive for COVID-19 amid its pandemic in the United Kingdom; he fully recovered on 14 January.
- I'm not very competent on this matter but there's 10% of possible of text violating copyright
- That's all. Sorry for my not being active on it but it did think you were no more interested on it as you were less active. Dr Salvus 20:21, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
- @Dr Salvus Done. ArsenalGhanaPartey (talk) 15:03, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
- @ArsenalGhanaPartey I've finished everything.
@ArsenalGhanaPartey: Omg, you've made a copyvio here and here. Dr Salvus 19:31, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
- The first edit is a quote, so it is not copyvio. The second is copyvio. However, neither edits were made by me. I'll resolve them. ArsenalGhanaPartey (talk) 20:08, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
- Correction, both are quotes. ArsenalGhanaPartey (talk) 13:44, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
Status query
Dr Salvus, ArsenalGhanaPartey, where does this review stand? Have the issues been addressed? Are there any issues with recent edits to the article? It would be nice to get this review moving again. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:45, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset, sorry I had completely forgot this. I'll immediately promote this. Dr Salvus 16:04, 9 June 2022 (UTC)



